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Offline Retsof

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Just another Idea that poped into my head.  Sorry about the leave you hanging ending, but that's just the way I write.  Hope you enjoy.
EDIT: Thought of a title.  "The Dream"

I reach my destination, and the blue walls of subspace are replaced by the speckled void of space.  I run a quick diagnostic on my fighter, it comes back good, except for a couple scorched relays.  Not bad, considering the hairball I just got out of.  My wingmen check in, all in good enough condition to fight.  We form up and move into standard escort position around the lumbering convoy.
   Minutes pass, then the Shivans strike.  My agile Perseus fighter leaps into action as I slam the throttles to full and rush to “greet” the new arrivals.  I loose myself in the ensuing battle as the Shivans pour in.
   I don’t know how much time has passed when I am brought back to reality by the voice of Command.  “We are detecting a massive shockwave emanating from the Capella star.”  Shockwave, what?  “Capella has gone supernova, get out of there pilots!”  It takes me a second to comprehend what is going on, and then I turn toward the node, diverting all power to engines and leaning on the burners.
   Something snaps, those relays won’t last much longer.  The node seems to move away from me as I push my fighter to its limits.  Another snap, accompanied by a shudder, my engine is giving out!  I am finally starting to get close to the node.  I hear a rumbling noise as small particles pelt my shields at nearly the speed of light.  I look to where the Capella star used to be, and see a blinding wall rushing toward me.  Almost there!  The wave is nearly upon me…
   I awake with a start.  My cabin is glowing reassuringly.  I had seen the beginning of the nova, but my vessel had left just before the star collapsed.  I am disturbed by this dream, It has been coming more and more frequently.
   I release the clasps on my sleeper.  Maybe it needs maintenance, it isn’t unheard of.  I tap the near wall with a limb, and float toward my terminal.  I turn it on and see the fleet around me, the massive ships scarred and pitted from their journey.
   Strange, I can almost still feel the alien chemicals coursing through my body, I must really get that bed fixed… the what?  I shake away the strange dream and put a maintenance request into the terminal.  I wonder how long it will take to repair all those ships…
« Last Edit: January 13, 2008, 10:26:43 pm by Retsof »
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I can't help but hear a shotgun cocking with this.

 
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Offline General Battuta

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So, I'm guessing the story's written from a Shivan POV?

 
....it is?
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Offline Retsof

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Correct.  I have no Idea what to do to continue this though.  Sorry, most all of my stories are like that.
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I can't help but hear a shotgun cocking with this.

 
wow, it's confusing. Confusing stories on their own can be bad (to me), though the way you do it can make a great storyline. An excellant start :yes:
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Offline Snail

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So this is like the Evolution of the Daleks where a Shivan gets infected by human emotions? :wtf:

 
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Offline achtung

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So this is like the Evolution of the Daleks where a Shivan gets infected by human emotions? :wtf:

A Shivan gains emotions in Evolution of the Daleks?  :p
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he was referring to when the Daleks get human emotions in Doctor Who.
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Offline Jeff Vader

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Yeah, but due to the word order and other variables it was possible to interpret that sentence in more than one way.
23:40 < achillion > EveningTea: ass
23:40 < achillion > wait no
23:40 < achillion > evilbagel: ass
23:40 < EveningTea > ?
23:40 < achillion > 2-letter tab complete failure

14:08 < achillion > there's too much talk of butts and dongs in here
14:08 < achillion > the level of discourse has really plummeted
14:08 < achillion > Let's talk about politics instead
14:08 <@The_E > butts and dongs are part of #hard-light's brand now
14:08 <@The_E > well
14:08 <@The_E > EvilBagel's brand, at least

01:06 < T-Rog > welp
01:07 < T-Rog > I've got to take some very strong antibiotics
01:07 < achillion > penis infection?
01:08 < T-Rog > Chlamydia
01:08 < achillion > O.o
01:09 < achillion > well
01:09 < achillion > I guess that happens
01:09 < T-Rog > at least it's curable
01:09 < achillion > yeah
01:10 < T-Rog > I take it you weren't actually expecting it to be a penis infection
01:10 < achillion > I was not

14:04 < achillion > Sometimes the way to simplify is to just have a habit and not think about it too much
14:05 < achillion > until stuff explodes
14:05 < achillion > then you start thinking about it

22:16 < T-Rog > I don't know how my gf would feel about Jewish conspiracy porn

15:41 <-INFO > EveningTea [[email protected]] has joined #hard-light
15:47 < EvilBagel> butt
15:51 < Achillion> yes
15:53 <-INFO > EveningTea [[email protected]] has quit [Quit: http://www.mibbit.com ajax IRC Client]

18:53 < Achillion> Dicks are fun

21:41 < MatthTheGeek> you can't spell assassin without two asses

20:05 < sigtau> i'm mining titcoins from now on

00:31 < oldlaptop> Drunken antisocial educated freezing hicks with good Internet == Finland stereotype

11:46 <-INFO > Kobrar [[email protected]] has joined #hard-light
11:50 < achtung> Surely you've heard of DVDA
11:50 < achtung> Double Vaginal Double ANal
11:51 < Kobrar> ...
11:51 <-INFO > Kobrar [[email protected]] has left #hard-light []

 

Offline Snail

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A Shivan gains emotions in Evolution of the Daleks?  :p

Yes, it's my campaign! The Daleks make an Alliance with the Shivans and destroy the GTVA! But the Shivans get human emotions and help the Doctor and some GTVA pilots defeat the Daleks! :p

 
A Shivan gains emotions in Evolution of the Daleks?  :p

Yes, it's my campaign! The Daleks make an Alliance with the Shivans and destroy the GTVA! But the Shivans get human emotions and help the Doctor and some GTVA pilots defeat the Daleks! :p
Then GTVA loses because command made the boanerges.
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Offline Snail

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Actually that was part of the Dalek's master plan. The Daleks knew that the Shivans would attack soon but they also knew that the GTVA could destroy the Shivans with their new GTB KickassBomber. Some Daleks infiltrated the GTVA as salt and pepper shakers and easily persuaded GTVA command to create the Boanerges instead of the KickassBomber.

The GTVA pilots still alive eventually steal the KickassBombers and use them to destroy the Daleks.

 
Some Daleks infiltrated the GTVA as salt and pepper shakers and easily persuaded GTVA command to create the Boanerges instead of the KickassBomber.

They also impersonated as robotic plunger machines.
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Offline Retsof

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(Ignoring the mindless babble)
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So this is like the Evolution of the Daleks where a Shivan gets infected by human emotions?  :wtf:
In my vague musings as to how I might continue this, It has something to do with a subspace wave that precedes the nova by heartbeat.  Something about the pilot getting sucked into or maybe absorbed by subspace.  Then the Shivans, who are sensitive to subspace start to "sense" him or something.
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Offline Kosh

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Nice story, although I could have sworn GTVA ships have artificial gravity......
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Offline NGTM-1R

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Nice story, although I could have sworn GTVA ships have artificial gravity......

Cuz, you know, they do.
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Offline General Battuta

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But it's a Shivan ship.

Now, granted, they have artificial gravity too -- at least judging by Hallfight -- but hey, the point stands!

  

Offline NGTM-1R

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But it's a Shivan ship.

Now, granted, they have artificial gravity too -- at least judging by Hallfight -- but hey, the point stands!

Actually, judging by Hallfight, they might not, and it was magnetic boots or the Shivan equivalent.
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