's a script fic, a type that lends itself to really crappy writers, so ff.net don't take them no more (and hasn't for ages, that policy predates my joining HLP for chrissakes).
Perhaps it gets better as it goes on, but on the other hand, I find even the first chapter a chore to read. It's not witty, insightful, cutting. It's extaggerated, but that's all. And that doesn't make a parody.
It's really eerily reminscent of the script fics that used to haunt many sections of ff.net, badly flanderizing the characters but not doing much of anything else worth mentioning. About the only real difference is this apparently flanderized them intentionally, and the author has some technical skill to try and cover the lack of storytelling skill.
