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After the Capella incident Emperor Khonsu II proposed the construction of a new Colossus class vessel to the GTVA council.

Terran government rejected the idea, arguing that they were involved in 2 Terran top priorities: The reconstruction of the Terran fleet, heavily affected by the NTF rebellion and the development and construction of a Portal to return to Sol.

Unpleased, Khonsu II ordered his engineers to secretly focus on this task avoiding any Terran assistance. Vasudan officers came back with a new Juggernaut design, more powerful than the Colossus itself.

The new design followed Shivan's forward beams configuration and was strongly based on the Sobek class corvette. Most important, Vasudan designers decided to use existing hulls of Hatshepsut destroyers under construction as main sections of the new ship.

Under these conditions, the new Juggernaut was built in half the time the original Colossus took, even faster than what Khonsu II expected.

Vasudan council decided to honour their emperor by naming this vessel after him.

Only one of this ship is known to exist as the flag ship of the Vasudan Imperial Fleet, but there might be a few more under Vasudan confidential construction.



 

Offline Galemp

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*looks at screenshots*

:lol: :lol: :lol:

*reads more*

:blah: Wait, you're playing this straight?
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Wait, um... you made a Vasudan Ugly capship?
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Actually that was the idea, an ugly Vasudan Juggernaut......... as my first mod with extremely limited designing skills........

I was specting to have fun reading the critics of it......

 

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Well, the idea of a Vasudan-styled Juggernaut is actually quite good, however, the components are far too recognisable.....(Although, it would be pretty awesome to see this breaking up into it's components like a Vasudan version of the Prometheus...)
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Dang, If you could make an original destroyer based off that, it would be frikkin schweet...
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:jaw: Who cares if it's an ugly or not, that is amazing

 
:jaw: Who cares if it's an ugly or not, that is amazing
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Well...  :blah:

The trouble here is that it's basically just some existing designs that have been glued together and frankly that wouldn't make up a very good or solid design. Not in the real word, and certainly not in the FS universe (IMO!!)...

That being said it does have potential for a post Vasudan warship and frankly I like the shape a lot (It has the awesomeness of the Typhoon all over it), but it needs to be more "unique" if you ask me... You should really invest time into modeling it from the bottom up and remove all the awkward similarities it has with FS2 Vasudan ships. It just doesn't look good to have some tiny Hatshepsuts glued together with a giant Sobek...
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Yeah, as a piece of concept art, this is amazing.
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Colossobekashepsut.
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A great idea, but it does need to look more... unique. :)

 

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I was like "wow that's cool looking" until I realized it was multiple Hatshepsuts fused into a Sobek.
Still, I'd play with it XD

Is that three-part radial symmetry I see there?
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Well, to be honest, I'm surprised with the feedback, definitively it needs a LOT of work or re-work (unfortunately I haven't got any decent skills for it......), but the fact that it could be used as a concept idea is a very good start for me.......

The design is just that:
A 10 times (on each coordinate) bigger Sobek as main structure
3 Hatshepsut full size as "arms" on a Y symmetrical configuration
1 Hatshepsut full size as forward section
Ventral part of a Hatshepsut expanded about 2 times (on each coordinate) to be used as a Corvette Bay area

83 working turrets (this was my real goal, i wanted to make "something" that could actually work within the game)

If anyone wants it, I have no trouble on giving it. I don't know if it is worth to upload it on Freespace Mods, but if any of you want it then I can try to put it there.....
« Last Edit: March 06, 2009, 07:25:11 pm by Hawk_eye »

 

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Well, of course it needs work, but the concept is damned awesome. And if someone comes up with a good concept, it is only right that they get praised a bit for it.
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I think it's good enough for FSMods. :nod:
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Haaa ok I see this as a Al Bundy special   :eek2:

I do commend you on your...ummm creativity  ;7
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It should be on Freespacemods now..................

 

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Very nice.... what does it look like untextured?  :)
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