The mission is part of a campaign I thought of where it's during the FS2 time period / 2nd Great War where the Shivans are on the brink of annilating everyone and everything, much like they did to the Ancients. Campaign is FS2:Turning Point. The capture of a major Shivan vessel, which succeeds (unlike before with the Taranis), is the turning point. Obviously I hope to make this campaign that, and much more.
I'm posting this because I'd like feedback on how I did with it (so as to make the other missions good) but also to put the info out that I'm doing this and if anyone would like to help (not saying anyone has to) they can.
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