Originally posted by Kamikaze 
This one is better, the lasers seem less... cluttered. 
I think the biggest part is lasers - Some of the guys here do it really cool... but what I suggest is adding a blur to it - a laser burst that's too solid looks wierd... 
 
heh, not that good with blur yet, i cant seem to blur one spot without leaving a clear edge at the transition between the part i blurred and the part i didnt, so as a result i usually blur all or none (with the exeption of text on white or black).  People dont seem to like blurred pictures however, not mentioning anynames *cough* Venom *cough*. 

  so if you know what i can do for that, please, suggest.