Wow, nice. I like how well it demonstrates the vast difference in size between subatomic particles and the Planck length. But I do have to nitpick about the rendition of the size of the observable universe, since a lot of people get this wrong.

The universe is currently estimated to be ~13.7 billion years old. But this does NOT mean that the edge of the observable universe is 13.7 billion light years away. The only way this would be true is if spacetime on cosmological scales was flat, and it is clearly not due to expansion. The true edge of the observable universe is about 46.5 billion light years from us.
As for the true size of the *entire* universe, it's unknown, but probably many magnitudes greater than what we can see.
Edit: Durr, that's supposed to be Planck, not plank. :O