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Offline Retsof

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Story building experement.
Just something I thought I would try.  Here goes:

Long ago, humanity expanded into the stars, and found that they were indeed alone. As technology advanced, humanity gained almost godlike powers.  Several groups emerged.  The Genelords, masters of the biological, created entire ecosystems and spread new life to the empty universe.  The Techlords (is that already taken? new name maybe?) masters of the mechanical, created technological marvels that bordered on magic.  And the Gravlords (don't like the sound of that one, suggestions?)  engineered the very worlds beneath their feet.

For a reason lost to time (aka I haven't thought of one) Galactic society collapsed around one thousand years ago.  Now the humans of Earth have rediscovered the power to travel the stars, and numerous wonders await them...

Now it's your turn, let's make a universe, shall we?  I guess one of the first things on the list is what the ships are like and what method of superluminal travel is used.  Then charicters can be built and adventures had.

Also, there is a particular enginered species I would like to include, but I'll see how this goes first.
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Offline Aardwolf

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Re: Story building experement.
So we're making up stuff of our own, or is it supposed to fit in with yours?

Your universe needs giant space bugs.

 

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Re: Story building experement.
Telepaths, everything is better with telepaths.

 

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Re: Story building experement.
Space bugs and space elves plz.
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Re: Story building experement.
Space bugs
Always awesome as an evil (or just because they're there and we can) race for mankind to crush with power-armored boots.
17:37:02   Quanto: I want to have sexual intercourse with every space elf in existence
17:37:11   SpardaSon21: even the males?
17:37:22   Quanto: its not gay if its an elf

[21:51] <@Droid803> I now realize
[21:51] <@Droid803> this will be SLIIIIIGHTLY awkward
[21:51] <@Droid803> as this rich psychic girl will now be tsundere for a loli.
[21:51] <@Droid803> OH WELLL.

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[07:57:32] <Caiaphas> inspired by HerraTohtori i built a supermaneuverable plane in ksp
[07:57:43] <Caiaphas> i just killed my pilots with a high-g maneuver
[07:58:19] <Caiaphas> apparently people can't take 20 gees for 5 continuous seconds
[08:00:11] <Caiaphas> the plane however performed admirably, and only crashed because it no longer had any guidance systems

 

Offline NGTM-1R

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Re: Story building experement.
I'm gonna pass on this one. Too far-future.
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Offline Snail

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Re: Story building experement.
New names for the sub-species. I mean, seriously.

 

Offline Retsof

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Re: Story building experement.
New names for the sub-species. I mean, seriously.
Yeah, I realized after I posted it just how dumb they sounded.

Space bugs
Always awesome as an evil (or just because they're there and we can) race for mankind to crush with power-armored boots.

I would like to avoid anything that is inherently evil.  But the humans may just find some bugs and decide to crush them.  Maybe throw in an enemy mine situation and you have a plot.
Telepaths, everything is better with telepaths.

Perhaps...
So we're making up stuff of our own, or is it supposed to fit in with yours?
Making a single universe, but there's plenty of room for creativity.  I basically posted this because I thought I had a good starting point for a story but no way to develop it.
So now I guess I need better names for the (insert field here)lords....
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Re: Story building experement.
Boobs and Dakka.
 
 
 
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Re: Story building experement.
No sexy alien ass?
17:37:02   Quanto: I want to have sexual intercourse with every space elf in existence
17:37:11   SpardaSon21: even the males?
17:37:22   Quanto: its not gay if its an elf

[21:51] <@Droid803> I now realize
[21:51] <@Droid803> this will be SLIIIIIGHTLY awkward
[21:51] <@Droid803> as this rich psychic girl will now be tsundere for a loli.
[21:51] <@Droid803> OH WELLL.

See what you're missing in #WoD and #Fsquest?

[07:57:32] <Caiaphas> inspired by HerraTohtori i built a supermaneuverable plane in ksp
[07:57:43] <Caiaphas> i just killed my pilots with a high-g maneuver
[07:58:19] <Caiaphas> apparently people can't take 20 gees for 5 continuous seconds
[08:00:11] <Caiaphas> the plane however performed admirably, and only crashed because it no longer had any guidance systems