[Colonol Dekker]

I enjoyed the accompanying events in that mission. But the dialogue was just a bit to cheesy for me. You pulled off a good attempt at trying to capture the feel of some of how EOD ops follow through. But i'm sorry to say ultimately it felt comic to me.
 
 
Whether that's because of what I've done and seen elsewhere or not I couldn't say. But if I hear render safe procedures one more time my head will pop.

[General Battuta]

Well you're real EOD, so I'm not surprised it didn't quite work for you. But feel free to drop any suggestions you have for improving the veracity.