Author Topic: Not an SF Astaroth WIP  (Read 11402 times)

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Offline Krallis

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Not an SF Astaroth WIP
If no one has called it yet, I would like to do the astaroth.

One of the ugliest and most nonsensical designs ive ever come across.
Id like to try and make it better, here's what i have so far.

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Offline peterv

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I think that you should stay closer to the retail. I also think that you should change this to a completely new Shivan because i like it very much.

 

Offline Snail

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Isn't there already an Asteroth in the works? That one Inferno is working on?

 

Offline Droid803

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This doesn't look much like an astaroth but it does look badass in its own way :P
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Offline Rodo

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Yes, forget about the Astaroth, your Shivan-thing's got that evil look but definitely not Astaroth like.
Still I like the shape very much, keep on it.
el hombre vicio...

  

Offline Dragon

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Astaroth is already worked on by INF team.
I suggest you to rename this one and keep working on it, we need custom HTL Shivan fighters.

 

Offline Rampage

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Our Astaroth WIP was rejected by the Community, so we handed it over to BrotherByron to work on it in order to prioritize other things needed by our project.

Nevertheless, your design is good and can and should develop into its own line of Shivan fighters.  Work on the neck and cockpit a bit more, and you'll have something quite nice indeed.

-INFTeam

 

Offline 0rph3u5

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Not Astaroth but awesome... keep at it!
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"...because they are not Dragons."

 

Offline Trivial Psychic

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It kinda reminds me of some of the ships from OTT.
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Offline Krallis

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Since its not going to be an astaroth, ive changed the design to make it more in line with the type of fighter i want..

Ill have pics up later today.
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Offline Krallis

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Here's that picture I promised.

Thoughts?

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Offline General Battuta

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Liked the first one with the split tails a lot more.

 

Offline 0rph3u5

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I'm with Battuta on this one .. but you shouldn't stop working anyway
"As you sought to steal a kingdom for yourself, so must you do again, a thousand times over. For a theft, a true theft, must be practiced to be earned." - The terms of Nyrissa's curse, Pathfinder: Kingmaker

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"I am Curiosity, and I've always wondered what would become of you, here at the end of the world." - The Guide/The Curious Other, Othercide

"When you work with water, you have to know and respect it. When you labour to subdue it, you have to understand that one day it may rise up and turn all your labours into nothing. For what is water, which seeks to make all things level, which has no taste or colour of its own, but a liquid form of Nothing?" - Graham Swift, Waterland

"...because they are not Dragons."

 

Offline Dragon

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Could you develop both designs?
I like them both and community is really short of custom HTL Shivan fighters.
You could even develop an entire line of next-gen HTL Shivan strikecraft, it'd certainly be appreciated by the community.

 

Offline Rodo

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Look, both models look really good, if you still have the last one you should work on both.

You've got some shivanish talent pal :yes:
el hombre vicio...

 

Offline Krallis

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Ill do my best. Im trying to put together a portfolio for university so, while im definately developing this one, other ships may get reassigned as side projects.

However  it is still too early to tell at this stage, because ive been playing freespace for about 12 or so years now. So its unlikely that there wont be more ships in future.

A bit more about this ship, though, Ive been thinkin of  it in terms of a Shivan Valkyrie.
Really  fast but not  as manouverable as a Dragon or a Ulysses.
Also, the spiked arms are in fact where the laser cannons are mounted (at the tip at least, like a Sathanas only its not a beam)
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Offline Trivial Psychic

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How about adding a bit aft of the central pod.  Take those pods on the sides that the pylon support struts come out of, and sweep them back perhaps slightly more than the length of the pod itself.
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Offline Krallis

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Here is a very quick concept paintover.
Id like to get your thoughts on it before I start into modelling proper.

And yes I have only done one wing on the concept because I only needed the ideas and the other wing was at such a steep angle you wouldnt have been able to see anything anyway.

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Offline Topgun

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I like the concept.