Anyway, having said what I did about the cockpit, I'm open to suggestions here. What do YOU think the cockpit should be like? a Vasudan laying back in a chair like state? standing straight up somewhat like in the GVF Shu? Or what?
Judging from the canopy shape, a reclined pilot would make most sense IMHO.
And, dude, that's a ****load of polies you have there. Way more than needed, especially for a fighter. In order to make a model look smooth, like Dragon said, you should use shade smoothing instead of using more polies. See
here for how to do it in Blender.