Please do not be offended, but I find your LPs to be very hard to sit through due to your narration. I understand improving your abilities as a narrator might be difficult, especially if English is not your native tongue (and given that you're opting to record in that language); however, I would still make an attempt to improve your diction, and I'd also make an effort to think more critically about what you say in your narration.
To make an example of your LP on Rediculous, over-narration and lack of control with respect to what and when you were speaking did not make it an enjoyable watch. In fact, I simply didn't bother to finish watching it. If SGWPt2 was so horrible, your narration really didn't make it any better.
This is a bit critical, but if you want to be an enjoyable LPer, what you say is just as important as how you play. The only thing, again, which I can say is that you need to take a more critical approach vocalizing your thoughts.