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Offline starbug

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New Race the Tal'Seth
OK, I am working on a mini campaign at the mo, when I've got free time from uni. My campaign features a new race called the Tal'Seth. A aggressive reptilian with slight avian feature humanoid. Their not going to be a mysterious race like the Shivans.  They can be communicated with etc. They see the Terrans as either slaves(their the lucky ones) to serve in their empire or as food. The Vasudans are of no use them so they are trying to wipe them out, also due to their appearance some terrans have named them Dragons. Technology wise they are about the same as GTVA, but they have no beam weapons. They instead use railguns, Mass drivers, and a type of energy torpedo. Also their ships have a lot of Armor, which helps them survive an encounter with say the broadside of an Orion. I'm not really wanting to give to much away. Also i thought it would be a change to do a race that isn't Shivan/Shadow/Vorlon/Vishnan, extremely advanced and mysterious but something on a more level playing field.

Anyway here is a screen shot of the Heavy Destroyer the TSD Varcan, (a re textured Kismat) armed with 9 Mass drivers(name will change when i come up with something better) 4 torpedo launchers and 20 standard laser turrets. The ship is designed for smashing through other capital ships, so most of her firepower is facing forward, although the torpedo launchers are mounted along the side. Main weakness are no figtherbay and a server lack of anti-fighter weapons, so she is vulnerable to fighter/bomber attack. Sofar in tests facing a single Orion the Varcan always wins. When the Orion has an escort of Aelous cruisers its more down to who gets the first salvo in, as the cruisers flak and AAAf can intercept most of the torpedo barrages. A single Orion can win if it attacks from the rear but will take a fair bit of damage from the torpedo launchers.

Thank you to Destiny and Dragon for helping me get the Energy torpedos to look the way i wanted them. will try to post a video of them working later, :)


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Offline Luis Dias

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
Maaaauuure aliens ftw !!

What's their story? Did they invade anyone else? Do they know the shivans? How did they survive them? What is their metaphysics? What is their vision of their place in the galaxy (apart from seeing lower things as food). Why do they even see mankind as "food"?

Perhaps you haven't covered this or even thought much about this yet, but they could prove to have very interesting and chilling answers.

 

Offline starbug

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
I am still working on the storyline for them, but for the sector of the galaxy they inhabit they have conquered serveral other species, and on their homeworld they are at the top of the foodchain and hunted the primates and mammals of their world for food, which is why they have taken a taste to humans, also they are Predators. They view themselves as masters and are very intelligent and cunning. They come into contact with the GTVA, via Knossos portal. The GTVA enter the system which the Tal'seth view as an invasion into their space and learning of humanity they find a new food source. They are about 6 to 7 foot tall, they are very strong but also lean, as they appear to be descendend from flying reptiles. Thats the extreme basics of them. As i said i am still working on this.
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Offline Luis Dias

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Why not having them 30 feet tall with wings? Picture something the size of Chronos eating a human...

 

Offline starbug

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Chronos???? who and what is that?
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Offline Luis Dias

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google "chronos eating a human" in the image section, you'll find it pretty quickly

 

Offline General Battuta

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
That is silly, don't do it.

 

Offline Luis Dias

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Silly is having all the races with mostly the same size....

 

Offline Snail

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
Have you heard of the square-cube law?

 

Offline starbug

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
Yeah, no i won't be doing that. i'll stick with 6-7 ft tall size thank you.

No i haven't  heard of the square cube law,

Edit just googled it, interesting, never knew that.
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Offline Luis Dias

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
A small planet with little gravity and, say, little heat (where storing of heat is essential), would probably have a selection pressure towards big animals.

starbug, no pb, just throwing random stuff... I'll behave.

 
Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
Well good, I was gonna ask why they didn't consider the Vasudans in the same light as the Terrans.  It makes sense though, if they hunted primates.  Good job explaining that. 

What, exactly, are Vasudans supposed to be?
Could we with ink the ocean fill, and were the skies of parchment made
Were every stalk on earth a quill, and every man a scribe by trade
To write the love of God above, would drain the ocean dry
Nor could the scroll contain the whole, though stretched from sky to sky!

 

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
[insert grumble about apostrophes in alien race names]

Really, especially adding an apostrophe after the first three letters. WHY!? T_T

Uh... sorry, I doubt anyone wants me to get into why I hate it again.
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Offline Luis Dias

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Well it's kinda awkward, if the explanation is they eat "primates" since that is a category of very specific terran animals....

 

Offline Snail

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
Convergent evolution...

 

Offline Luis Dias

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Ok, I'll suspend my disbelief!

 

Offline Snail

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Ok, I'll suspend my disbelief!
Fiction does require you to do this.

 

Offline Luis Dias

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Ok, I'll suspend my disbelief!
Fiction does require you to do this.

Good fiction doesn't require any of this, it commands your will to do so like it is a slave of it.

 

Offline SypheDMar

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
[insert grumble about apostrophes in alien race names]

Really, especially adding an apostrophe after the first three letters. WHY!? T_T
I have to agree. Adding the apostrophes make it look less "professional". I'd only use an apostrophe if you were trying to separate vowels (e.g. Ta'el so that it'd be 'Tah-Ehl' instead of 'Teyhl'). Adding an apostrophe between consonants does nothing with pronunciation, unless it's something like K'nife.

As for primates, I agree with Luis Dias here. 'Primate-like species from their homeworld' might fit better. I don't know. You decide, but to be honest, I don't really like the background much and would rather you do a rewrite.

As for as the ship itself, the texture looks pretty bad (and Vasudan-like). :<

 

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Re: New Race the Tal'Seth
So this intelligent space-faring species....hunts humans for food?

I assume it can produce it's own food - they have the equalent of farms and stuff. So why would they bother? They have acess to food that doesn't try to fry them with a beam cannon.
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