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Offline jg18

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Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
EDIT: I have since decided to work on wxLauncher, so I'm no longer offering proofreading services. Thanks for your interest.



Hi HLPers!

I was wondering whether any campaign designers would be interested in having someone (or yet another person) proofread the text in their campaigns.

The text I'm willing to proofread includes that found in
I can check that the text is
  • grammatically correct (including spelled correctly)
  • idiomatically correct (that is, something an English speaker might say)
  • stylistically reasonable (this is where things can get subjective)
and maybe provide some other comments on the side. I use American English, but if the text is un-American uses a different English variant, such as British, I'll try to stick to that.

I can't help with
  • FREDding
  • modeling
  • writing
  • testing
  • etc.
mostly for lack of either skills (in some cases) or time (in the rest). :(

As for my credentials, besides being a native English speaker... as a grad student, I edit papers, both mine and others'. Of course, you always have the option of using all, some, or none of my suggested changes.

I've played through the entire FS2 campaign and around half of the FS1 main campaign (through FSPort), and I've also read quite a few of the articles on the FreeSpace Wiki, so I have a pretty good idea of how a campaign's text should sound. I also recently started playing BP (which has blown me away) and hope to play through it and other campaigns when I can -- alas, for grad students, work continues throughout the summer.

Reply if you're interested. I'd strongly prefer to receive files that can be edited in a text editor. If possible, I'd also prefer to receive files packaged as a tarball (.tar.gz) or ZIP file rather than as a VP.

Thanks for your consideration.
« Last Edit: July 19, 2011, 08:22:27 am by jg18 »

 

Offline Mongoose

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
Aw hell...so much for going off on people.  I wish we'd get a warning if all of the posts we were replying to were split in the middle of writing a scathing comeback. :p

Gay Vasudan, welcome to HLP, and thanks for your offer to help. There's been talk about starting up some sort of "writer's workshop" around here, but some of the best-qualified people to do so have a lot of other stuff on their plates already, so this would be a great service. :)
« Last Edit: June 05, 2011, 02:28:05 pm by Mongoose »

 

Offline SypheDMar

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
Oh, so you're GV on IRC. Welcome to the forum! I noticed that you used an Oxford comma. Nice~

Recently, I've edited the grammar, idiomatic, and spelling of two well-known FreeSpace campaigns. They're found under the FreeSpace Restoration Project.

 
Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
I would like to have more information on the"writer's workshop". My field of study is in Gender research and Human Sexuality: Not in FREDding or modeling. I may be able to assist in character development and exploring human nature.

 

Offline jg18

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
Gay Vasudan, welcome to HLP, and thanks for your offer to help. There's been talk about starting up some sort of "writer's workshop" around here, but some of the best-qualified people to do so have a lot of other stuff on their plates already, so this would be a great service. :)

Oh, so you're GV on IRC. Welcome to the forum! I noticed that you used an Oxford comma. Nice~

Recently, I've edited the grammar, idiomatic, and spelling of two well-known FreeSpace campaigns. They're found under the FreeSpace Restoration Project.

Thanks for the welcome! I don't think I'd be able to help with a workshop, but I can help with editing. In the real world, writers -- even great ones -- (usually) have editors.

 

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Offline Lester

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
http://www.hard-light.net/forums/index.php?topic=71765.0
Umm, forum members that aren't involved in a hosted project can't see that board, Mobius.

I'll quote the OP for posterity.

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That said, I have a minor request I've recently discussed with TopAce. What about a "Guild of Writers", composed of native speakers of English willing to help people out with mission scripts and other things?

The "service" would not be for foreigners, only, as everyone may benefit from an accurate analysis of mission scripts, verifying wheter or not they're appropriate. Is it doable? I'm not sure it requires a new board, probably not even a private one, so I'd like people to discuss the subject.

 
Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
hi i wana bee beta tester its ok

 

Offline Deadly in a Shadow

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
hi i wana bee beta tester its ok
You mean you need a proofreader for your campaign.

This is a proofreader thread:D
"Ka-BOOOOOOOOM!!!!"
"Uh, Sir we can hear the explosion."
"No you can't, there is no air in space. Sound can't travel through a vacuum!"

 
Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
oh sorry
i want only testing
not fredding

 

Offline TopAce

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Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
This thread isn't about a campaign. It's about someone who offers his help to improve English in other campaigns.
My community contributions - Get my campaigns from here.

I already announced my retirement twice, yet here I am. If I bring up that topic again, don't believe a word.

 
Re: Need someone to proofread your campaign's text?
ok