[Dark_4ce]

Ok, I know these suck, but I want some honest oppinions/tips on making them better. I need them for a portfolio I'm supposed to make for a Graphics design school, so they want me to make an EX LIBRIS picture. So, if they suck tell me, but I really don't have to make them Super good to get into the school. Just something to show them that I know atleast what I'm doing. Ok, here they are...

The first one I was working on...


The second one with chromesolarize...


The second one with Hard Light...


I did these all today in a few hours, and like I said these aren't like renders, but meant for graphic design. So think about book covers, dvd/cd covers, magazines, and even web content.

Thanks...

[Gortef]

The first one is exploding... quite good but not the best IMHO

The second one has style and is good for the eyes. My favourite
(allthough I'd propably move the "Stephen" part a bit to the right)

The third one hurts my eyes... not a bad one though it would be my favourite if the background were a bit darker

[LtNarol]

could i get you to do some graphics for a webpage?

[Dark_4ce]

Originally posted by LtNarol
could i get you to do some graphics for a webpage?

Yeah sure... More practice, more experience. I just hope it isn't too complicated and without a deadline. Going to Norway on the 16th.

[Stunaep]

No. 3 is wayyyyy too bright, I'm not sure how well it would look printed out, but no. 2 is quite ok, except it needs better Anti-Aliasing.

[Styxx]

First one is best - add a stronger glow and more fractal/turbulent noise to the central orange explosion and it'll be even better.

[Dark_4ce]

Ok, this ones more darker. Any better?

[LtNarol]

Out standing...now when are you gonna get around to the 158th stuff?

[Dark_4ce]

heh. Working on it. Just that I got this assigment to finnish for monday. After that I got more time.

 All I've done so far is the spacebar. Much like you're first one I may add. But, what type of stuff do you want? What I saw is quite good as it is. Neat and simple. But PM me with the details.

[Gortef]

Originally posted by Dark_4ce

Ok, this ones more darker. Any better?

Much better!

[LtNarol]

Originally posted by Dark_4ce
heh. Working on it. Just that I got this assigment to finnish for monday. After that I got more time.

 All I've done so far is the spacebar. Much like you're first one I may add. But, what type of stuff do you want? What I saw is quite good as it is. Neat and simple. But PM me with the details.

If it looks good, it'll do

[Redfang]

It's good now.