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Offline Zeronet

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Due to a lack of English-Latin Translation, i could only come up with the name Adversarius meaning enemy, really what i wanted was Razored Enemy in latin. The original picture was a doodle so to speak, this is just a copy, plus some alterations.




Their claws are about a metre long, made out of a extremely strong alloy, and the surface is covered in billions of tiny razors(about 1/10 the width of a hair), the creature also excretes a diamond crystal over its claws, making them extremely hard. It posses both an internal bone structure and an external exoskeleton which is highly resistant to heat and penetration. Its visible extends into the infra-red range. Namely something i came up for as a 4th(out of the main 3) race in NW3.
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Dude, your hand-writting is almost as retarded as mine.

Anyway: It's head needs to be bigger and nastier. More upper-body strength.
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no manipulators?
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Offline Zeronet

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That would detract from the mystery of how they actually build stuff :) and also makes it look odd.

HINT:The Dark spot on its belly is actually soft.
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Those wings on the back?

Ugh, not another human face. Other than that, not bad.

 

Offline Mad Bomber

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The four-legged thing is a nifty idea, I had a similar idea for an RPG species called the Chalgasi.

I think they should have manipulative 7-fingered hands (5 fingers and 2 thumbs each) on their lower arms (which should be longer). Also IMO you should ditch the wings in favor of excessive jumping capability.
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I sure hope its not supposed to be a menacingly scary race... because it looks like it is a happy fairy dancing in a field of pansies.
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Offline Zeronet

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Originally posted by vadar_1
I sure hope its not supposed to be a menacingly scary race... because it looks like it is a happy fairy dancing in a field of pansies.


Sure, it only has 1 metre long claws...
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Get a bit of inspiration from Ep 1's Droidikas? ;)
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Offline Zeronet

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Get a bit of inspiration from Ep 1's Droidikas? ;)


There's no inspiration anywhere, well no consious inspiration. i started doodling claws and then added a body to fit them.

This lastest one, is 2d totally, there is one back leg, but 2 front legs, 2 top arms, 2 middle arms and 2 lower arms.

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Hey its not bad but it isnt fierce enough... I think its the position you have it in. you should try a 3d sketch... It would take some practice but you'll be extrememly happy with the results when you have that skill. Good start, possibly develop it some more? I dunno... :D
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Offline Zeronet

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Its my current obsession. Im just fleshing its main features out, changing its stance will be the next step, naturally i cant drawn something too complicated inbetween writing stuff down during a lesson.
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hmm... i wonder how the Advies would fare in a Hallfight-like situation, against Shivans...
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Offline Zeronet

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They'd certainly be able to cut the shivan in half without much trouble. They kill anything that is not part of their subgenus.
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Rules of alien-making:

1. Anything with recognizably human features or profile is less scary than humorously B-movie-like. Exception: Giger's Alien. Because that thing kicked ass enough with enough novel ideas to offset the crappiness. Nobody, outside of Giger and schizophrenics, will be able to repeat this performance.

2. It's not just out to kill people. NOTHING in the Universe is created specifically to destroy something it's never been in remote contact with.

3. Look at every mainstream alien ever made. Do something completely different, unless all you want is comments such as "Wow! That looks like (insert popular alien race here)!" Fortunately, the vast majority of these are crappy TV aliens, and fall under the category of #1- unconvincing.

4. If they speak English, you aren't cut out for this sort of thing. Quit before you are mocked senseless.

5. Aliens do best when they have one thing going for them massively, and that one thing only- Aliens don't have any real technology, Shivans don't innovate and are crap without their shields, etc. You can't be good at everything at once.
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Offline Zeronet

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That creature has no human features, it has a head which looks like a T-Rex's head, with an extended skull to fit its larger brain. Most things really can look vaguely human, as its pure physics that some things must be a certain way(like eyes pointing forward for depth perception).

As for why they kill everything, well what else would they do? These creature's main goal, it to eat. To power its powerful muscles.
« Last Edit: September 13, 2002, 09:48:11 am by 419 »
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Offline Stryke 9

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Originally posted by Zeronet
as its pure physics that some things must be a certain way(like eyes pointing forward for depth perception).


Shivans? Or, better yet, how about the Beast? Or Zerg? Or those amoeboid ****ers from that really cheesy show? You know, not everything even HAS eyes (and that's jsut on earth), and most herbivores actually have them way to the sides for maximum viewing area. I dunno, I just can't stand aliens that look like a guy in a suit and Halloween mask.

If their only compulsion is to eat, one would wonder how they made it into space.

 

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« Last Edit: September 14, 2002, 11:28:33 am by 419 »
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I completely agree with the giegers alien part, except the bit where it gets blown out of the shuttle, there it looks immensly guy in a suit fake. Aliens did a good job by putting circus acrobatics people in them and having them leap around and pull inhumn poses.