Okay, here you go.SCRIPT FOR TOMBOUGH STATION ATTACK (version 1):Start
You only see a sensor screen (should be like the one in the FS1 Intro). On the left side, you see the symbol for the Arcadia, flanked by two cruiser symbols and three wing symbols. The Arcadia is in the middle, the rest forms a circle around her.
(Addition: You also see a transport symbol heading to the edge of the screen but that's just there because it would look good.)
In the upper right corner, you can spot a red shivan cruiser symbol, accompanied by a Terran Destroyer Symbol, a fighter wing and a symbol for the towing transport. The transport and cruiser symbols are highlighted (and maybe even linked by a line or something).Camera zooms back a little and goes upward then, above the console is a window
Through the window, you see the blackness of space. But it's not empty. The Taranis, showing some signs of battle, is being towed towards the station (not directly into the window of course, lets say its course differs about 50 degrees from a collision course into the player's face). In a distance (and behind the taranis), you see a majestic GTD Orion. Text appears: "Ribos System Tombough Station 0340 hours".
You hear communication: Commencing docking procedure (or something like that). The transport undocks from the Taranis, which continues to move towards the station (-> momentum).CUT to the comm officer, the one you is supposed to sit in front of the above mentioned console and window
He or she says "Acknowledged Halkins... ...she's right on course."CUT to space, camera is behind and a little bit under the Taranis. You it heading towards the Arcadia, behind the installation, you can spot a Fenris and a Leviathan cruiser.
"Roger, Tombough. We are glad to get rid of that thing."CUT, camera still in space. Upper, forward view of the Taranis (not directly in its "face"). In the background, you can see the Halkins turning away from the cruiser and towards the GTD Orion.
Comm Officer: "Can you spot any activity?" (only comm chatter)Two Valks (could also be Apollos, but I would love to see the Valk) approach from behind the camera right through it and fly past the Taranis.
Pilot: "Negative. Still, I wouldn't volunteer going in..." (only comm chatter).CUT to the Comm Officer's face again.
Comm Officer: "Well, in contrast, our scientists are---" (EPIC MUSIC STARTS!!!
)CUT to space, a huge subspace portal opens, camera angle is the same as in the FS1 Intro. You know that's the big bugger. The Lucy's nose appears.
Pilot: "What the---"CUT, Camera is above and close to the hull of the GTD Orion now. Wide angle shot. Your view contains the two Terran cruisers, the Arcadia, the Taranis drifting towards it, the transport which is still near the Taranis and of course big bad Lucy fully emerging from Subspace. The Superdestroyer is between the Orion and the Arcadia.CUT to the Sensor screen from the beginning, a very big red symbol pops up.CUT to the Comm Officer's face again.
Comm Officer's face shows his or her fear. CUT, close shot of the Lucy.CUT to Lucy's fighterbay.
Fighter's emerge. Lots of fighters.CUT to sensor screen.
Red wing symbols everywhere around the Lucy.
Comm Officer: "All ships engage, engage! Protect the station!"CUT, very close shot of the GTD Orion's turrets, they start to turn directly into the player's face.
Orion opens fire, a big green shot fills the screen.CUT, wide angle and camera above the Orion again
The two terran cruisers are close to Lucy and are firing all turrets, the Orion's turrets hammer Lucy's hull from the other side.
There is absolutely no effect.CUT, dogfight.
A shivan fighter blasts one of the Valks. Shivan Laser fire is everywhere. (just a short cut).CUT, behind one of the Terran Cruisers.
A wing of shivan fighters races directly past it, firing all the while. The starboard side of the ship is burning at multiple spots.
(just a short cut)CUT, wide angle and camera above the Orion againCUT to Taranis. Arcadia and Cruisers in the background. The Fenris spins out of control. Laser shots everywhere.
For two seconds, you see nothing special (but the firefight in the background). Then, Shivans (THE SHIVANS, not a fighter) float towards the camera at high speed, leaping at the viewer.CUT, you see the Halkins from a distance. camera zooms in at high speed, directly onto the hull of the Halkins.
(Supposed to be the view of a Shivan boarding the Halkins, maybe some weird camera effect would fit here).CUT, Hull of the Halkins
A shivan has attached himself to the hull and slices it with the plasma beam. (Just like Matrix, I want that in there. We see the Shivans only one time in all of FS, time to change that, don't you think?)CUT to GTD Orion's, full view of the ship
All turrets are still firing, the ship is damaged and burns (or glows) at some spots.CUT to Lucy, side view.
The shots of the Orion don't do anything. The Lucy charges the mediaVP beam and fires.CUT to Taranis, full view
The beam just sweeps over the hull of the cruiser, leaving nothing but some debris.CUT to the burning Fenris, it is still spinning out of controlCUT to a Shivan bomber, front view
It launches a torpedo.CUT back to the Fenris, side view.
The Torpedo hits the already damaged side of the ship. The Fenris breaks up and explodes, a piece of debris is propelled directly into the camera and...CUT,