[Petrarch of the VBB]

Think what she could do with that uber right hand...

:runs:

[Nico]

Originally posted by Gortef
thanks guys ^_^
and no there's no relationships to anyone

Nico, I don't see that flaw
her shoulders are raised in my book. It's just that the shirt is hiding the truth.
Then again, you propably draw bodies a bit differently than me so it looks flawed to you
So we're both right

mhh... I don'(t have the right words to explain... it's about angles and stuff, and the fact they starttrom too low...
hmm, just go in front of a mirror and take that pause :)you'll see the "bumps" of the shoulders clearly go "above" the base of the neck, and the hell if I'm able to explain that properly

[Shrike]

She'd look good in a nice vinyl dress and knee-high boots.

[Thorn]

mhh...  I don'(t have the right words to explain... it's about angles and stuff, and the fact they starttrom too low...
hmm, just go in front of a mirror and take that pause you'll see the "bumps" of the shoulders clearly go "above" the base of the neck, and the hell if I'm able to explain that properly

I understand what you're saying, but you have to remember that women's shoulders generally arent as broad as men's...

[Nico]

yeah, I know, I've done anaomical drawings for a year
mmh, the fact she has very strong biceps might not help the feeling, in fact...nitpicking, nitpicking: the knees are too low
( sorry for criticizing much, but I think you have talent so I want you to improve )

[Gortef]

Yeah critic is good since I can't notice everything in a short amount of time and I don't have much time to do a single pic. So I usually make one and think it's good enough and then miss many spots I should fix or improve

(and there's the matter of taste )