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Offline icespeed

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hey, all that tech stuff sounds cool...
i just had a weird image reading about the energy shields... if humans tried to integrate them into their metal ships, what would happen? 'energy' sounds like they're using electromagnetism. If the ship hulls were somehow magnetised without melting them... well, what would that do? maybe by superconduction (superconductivity is cool!) which would be less difficult to achieve in space than planetside... though expensive as hell, probably...

the mycoids sound like they have it the easiest. just grow your weapons and things.
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When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

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Offline Nico

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If you put a shield on a terran ship, it will just... hmm, hard to describe... it will run everywhere in the ship, imagine a huge battery, if you could visualize electricity, well, if you plugged it on a metalic object, it would scatter everywhere. Yeah, voila, it works the same as electricity, basically. Would be very bad for computers and stuff, too, obviously :p

And yeah, the mycoids have it the easiest, that's why they're the most dangerous of the lot ;) ( disregarding the fact they're also outnumbering everybody by 1/1000000000000000000000000000000000 - exagering, of course, but not that much :p )
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Offline icespeed

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haha, yeah alright...

what are the mycoids? what are they like?
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Good storyline, venom. Despite my best efforts, I can't spot any holes :D

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Offline Nico

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They're mushrooms :p
In fact, they've evolved so much there's a lot of different "species". Most of them are pretty dumb, in fact, because of the wild evolution thinguy. They're not very original concept-wise I gotta admit, imagine zergs or things like that, but I like the idea of space monsters. There's a lot of different forms, insects, spiders, squids, etc, so I've set up an handful of distinctive features that shows they all come from the same origin ( 6 limbs, two of them being much larger, 6 eyes, etc ). There's a pic of a drone somewhere in this thread, hmm... there you go:

You can guess, this one is of the dumb kind ( :p ). It's a kind of ground warrior, and tanks are better against those :p ( oh, yeah, I have tanks, too, of course, there, Reaper tank:

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This one is about the size of the tank, some are as big as a capship, some a bit bigger than a human.
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Offline Nico

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Originally posted by Unknown Target
Good storyline, venom. Despite my best efforts, I can't spot any holes :D

Thumbs up! :yes: ;)


Thanks :)
For the record, I've been working on:
-Outerspace: I can find concept pics and storyline elements from 1992 ( ouch... the thing as changed an awful lot since then )
-Veil of Darkness: Same deal, stuff back to 92 ( I suspect I could find older stuff for both universes )
-Oleon Wars: 2000 ( that's the most recent of the lot, but I'm sure I started at least one year or two before 2000 actually, just can't find older stuff ).
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Offline icespeed

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??? how does a mushroom evolve into something that looks like a giant praying mantis?
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Nico

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Go wonder :p
But hey, they're ALIEN mushrooms, those things are Teh w31rd :D
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Offline Unknown Target

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How about they were simply the evolved forms of indigionous species on the planets, harnessed for war? Or they were all genetic monstrosities, spit out by one giant "Creature factory," and are each inserted with a chemical determining what type of warrior they'll be?
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Offline icespeed

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sure, its no weirder than random fishes and things turning into humans, hey? ;)
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Hey, you know, most (if not all) creatures on Earth look the same during pregnancy for about...what, 2 weeks? A month? Something like that.

 

Offline Nico

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Well, they sure are evolved forms of indigenous species from a planet :p. oh, you wanna know how far I can go into useless details? There you go:

Mycoids homeworld ( beware, it's weird, as I said :p ):
Uriah Secondus:
-Giant gazeous planet
-Dead core, diameter 30000 Km in diameter
-Gazeous sphere: 120000 Km in diameter
-61 oceans ( to date, they seem to often merge and split  )in suspension, trapped in the gaz layer. Gravity and a high revolution speed keeps them mid-air, taking the shape of gigantic drop-shaped water lenses.
- average temperature on sun side: +-50°C
- biomass: important ( mycoids and local vegetals/animals )

Uriah Secondus is the second planet of the Uriah 12 system

Uriah 12 ( star ):
Red giant
Uriah 12 ( system )
3 planets, 21 satelites, very heavy asteroid presence
Located in the External ( Perseus, North on galactic plane ) Arm of our galaxy.

Uriah Prime:
-Rock planet
-diameter: 31000 km
-Biomass: none
-average temperature: 800°C

Uriah Secondus:
-See first entry

Uriah Ters:
-Rocky planet
-Diameter: 17000Km
-Biomass: none
-Average temperature: -120°C

I have no data on atmosphere, coz I have no knowlegde in that.
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Offline icespeed

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what, like little wormy things with limbs? and big bulgy alien-like eyes?
(personally i don't think that really proves anything... why should an animal personally relive evolution during the pre-natal period? there's no reason for it.)

edit: in reply to ut's post
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline icespeed

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and nico... those useless facts aren't interesting. :p
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Nico

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Bleh :p
That's why they're useless :D

Anyway, for the mushroom thing, well, they started as mushrooms with some sort of brains, and they evolved, that's it :p
Don't look too much into details :D
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Offline icespeed

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okay i wont.

have you any interesting characters to follow yet, in OS i mean?
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Nico

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Yeah, a few. But I gotta confess it's all in my head, I never wrote anything down about them :p
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Offline icespeed

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so is the story going to be set in that last war you were talking about, between the humans and- oh, i forget the names. grays. and the ones beginning with v.
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Nico

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Main story follows a family, it starts with the Mars independancy war and goes way after what I posted.
There's also a few side stories that have nothing to do with that family, or even with spaceships and stuff. Most of the work there is to have a convincing background where I can place any kind of story I want with a futuristic feeling to it.
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Offline Unknown Target

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Venom, a hint about characters; stay away from the steriotype ;) It can kill a good story to have dull and uninteresting characters :)

EDIT: Kool! A family story! Lol, that's good :)

But PLEASE don't have the son be angry at the father for some sibling death that the son thinks the dad's responsible for :D SO overused, haha :D
« Last Edit: January 18, 2004, 09:53:29 pm by 368 »