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Offline Singh

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Again, something that struck me in a moment....hopefully I should be able to finish it (yeah, right).........

                                        Prologue[/u]

This is the audio log of Admiral Aken Bosch, ex-leader of the Neo Terran Front.

It has been almost 4 days since we left the last traces of Terran forces inside the Nebula beyond Gamma Draconis. It’s been a hard time living in the cramped interior of the Shivan transport, and communication has been crude since then, but we have managed to adapt to the surroundings and the attempts are getting clearer everyday. The Shivans have mostly left us alone on the transport, with only a single pilot onboard. This is to allow us to modify the transport to fit our needs. Gibson has already managed to renovate quite a portion of the ship as it is, but still, we now face the crisis of a lack of food and water.

Our communications sorties with the Shivans have been short and brief, but extremely detailed. Each time the ETAK device is activated, I am welcomed to a host of new information of our former enemies. The fools in the GTVA could not have imagined the wealth of knowledge the Shivans have of not only our civilizations, but that of the ancients as well. Upon going through this, it fills me with both joy as well as sadness to think that all our conflicts, all our differences in the past have been just one unholy mistake. Everything I have lived and fought for; It’s all been vindicated, all been justified, by what the Shivans have shown me here today.

No human being could imagine what they have been doing all these years. We all thought that the Shivans were the great destroyers, the possible extinction of both our species. I do not blame those who thought that, for it is what the scenario looks like from the surface. But now I have the insight and the truth of the situation.

Unfortunately, it is the entire damning truth of the situation. The Shivans are only part of a much larger problem that haunts not only the Humans and Vasudans themselves, but the ancients too. From what the Shivans have told me, the problem doesn’t stop there as well, for they do not know how far or wide it is present in this universe……or if it even is just to this universe as well.

The Shivans were waiting for us, just as they were waiting for the ancients to arrive and as well as the races before them. Why they destroyed the ancients and not humanity, they refused to tell me, but they did tell me that all will be revealed at our destination. The Shivans are currently taking us to an unknown location where they claim food and supplies will be available to us, and from where our journey may begin.

What exactly this journey is, or where I will be doing, I do not know. What I do know is that it appears to be sacred importance to the Shivans, and that only we may embark on it.

At this hour, I should be feeling joyful; if not ecstatic…..but then, why do I feel nothing but dread, and a little bit of horror of what’s to come?
« Last Edit: December 26, 2004, 11:08:21 pm by 1259 »
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Offline NGTM-1R

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I like.

Your writing is quite good, in both technical competency and storytelling.
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Great work. :)  That could be the premise for part of a truly great campaign (or a certain unmentionable sequel :p).  I can never understand the viewpoint of those who wouldn't want any mention of Bosch in said unmentionable sequel; your writing just furthers my desire to just know exactly what happened to Bosch out there.  Shivan barbeque/guinea pig?  I think not.

 

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More please.
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A Journey of the Forgotten
I like, it could be the start of a good alternative campaign.
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Offline Singh

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A Journey of the Forgotten
More. Note, I had my bro's laptop and nearly two hours on the bus ride to my uncle's house. You do the math :P

Chapter 1

Gibson looked out at the stars through the makeshift view port. His face was visible clearly in the reflection of the glass. One could see from his face that this was an old and wrinkled man, whose features radiated wisdom. His eyes were sunken in and brown in color, matching the wavery color of the somewhat long front hair that occasionally drooped down to cover it, only to be brushed aside and set back again.

What are we doing here? Gibson asked himself. Why did it seem that the mysteries of the Shivans had simply increased each time they made communications with them? He had watched everyday as the Shivans traversed system after system, nebula past nebula, all to some strange and totally unknown destination. According to his estimate, they had already traveled enough distance to put the GTVA on the other side of the Galaxy. Yet, it didn’t seem like they were going to stop just there from what the Shivans had told them…

Speaking of which….Gibson turned from the window to look for Sargo.  A somewhat short and stout person, Sargo's most distinguishing feature were his bright blue eyes and wavery blonde hair. A bright and patient young man of Asian origin, Sargo always seemed to go about with a smile, no matter how bad the situation might be. At times of extreme stress, he never got flustered, which was one of the main reasons why Bosch had chosen him to come along with their expedition. While Gibson may have been Bosch's right hand man, Sargo was definitely next in line.

Gibson spotted Sargo a little distance away, towards the back of the room and near the exit that led to Bosch's quarters. He was looking out of the only other window in the cabin, hovering over the floor in the zero G of the transport. Waving his hands, Gibson tried to get Sargo's attention, but when that failed, he had to speak up, shattering the silence in the room with his rather loud and hi-pitched voice.

"Sargo!:"

Sargo didn't look back immediately. Gibson spoke up again, this time a bit louder. "Sargo! Are you alright?"

Still no response. Frowning, he kicked himself off the wall and flew across the room towards Sargo's position. It was only at the last minute however, that Gibson realized he had actually used too much force and was flying too fast. But there was no way to stop in the Zero Gravity environment, unless he had something to push against. Unfortunately, to Sargo's unpleasant surprise, that something was him.

"SARGO! Get out of the way" Gibson shouted as he attempted to change his course. His shout must have had some effect, as Sargo shook his head and looked around in surprise. When he saw Gibson flying straight to him, he exclaimed "What the hell??!" before ducking out of the way. It was just in time as Gibson hit the far wall, bouncing off into the floor like a ping pong ball. He managed to get a hold on the floor however, and stopped himself before flying off to the ceiling.

Sargo was pretty much surprised and hovering to one side, rubbing his eyes and looking at Gibson. "What the hell are you trying to do Gibson, Kill me??! You nearly gave me a heart attack!"

Gibson turned around to look at him for a second, and then merely laughed. "Looks like you needed one too, judging from the way you were asleep."

Sargo frowned. "I wasn't sleeping...err. I was simply resting my eyes." he replied. But when his mouth broke into a big yawn, it gave it all away, leaving his face in a somewhat embarrassed expression.

Gibson merely laughed again before replying. "Look, Sargo, you can go to sleep, just don't go to sleep here. Get back into the general quarters and ask John to replace you. He should be up by this time anyways."

Sargo simply shook his head, refusing the offer. "Look, I'm fine. I'm just a bit tired, that's all. I can keep go-:" his sentence was interrupted by another big yawn. He cursed to himself, muttering something about lack of food and no sleep.

Gibson shook his head sadly, and pointed to the entrance of the room. "Go. Now. Before I make Bosch come out here and send you to bed."

Sargo simply retorted. "I can say the same about you, considering the fact that you've been doing duty for the past two days as well! If I'm tired, then why aren't you?"

"Because I haven't started yawning or -" He froze mid-sentence as something came into view of the window.

"Yeah, or what?" Sargo asked. He obviously hadn't seen what had just come into view. But then he saw that Gibson wasn't paying attention and instead looking outside the window. Sargo turned around to have a look as well. When he saw what was outside also, he could only exclaim "Holy fricking ****. What the hell is that thing?"

Gibson was unable to tear his eyes away from the thing for a few more seconds. But eventually, he did manage it. "Sargo, wake the others." He spoke as he moved towards Bosch's door. Knocking on it, he received a somewhat muffled reply. "Who is it?"
Bosch said, his tone somewhat irritated.

"Sir, it's Gibson. I really think you might want to come out and see this."

**************

This is the audio log of Admiral Aken Bosch, ex-leader of the Neo Terran Front.

It's been three days since my last audio log and there has been a lot happening since. The continued use of the ETAK device has allowed us a multitude of refinements and tweaks, all of which has now allowed for near-instantaneous and continual communications with the Shivans. I am communication with them for several hours so far, and the information I have managed to acquire is enough to keep any group of scientists and researchers enough work for decades, if not centuries! Not one person in the GTVA could have imagined how old this race really is, of the events they have witnessed over millions - if not billions - of years in not only our universe, but in others as well.

But then, the mystery remains, why did the Shivans attack us? Why did they attack the Ancients all those decades ago? For a race as old as theirs, it seems doubtful they attacked us out of simple xenophobia. If it were as simple as that, then they would not have accepted our signal or even allowed us onboard their vessel for that matter. No, there are other more subtle reasons behind all this. Reasons I must find out soon or risk the survival of myself and my crew.

Some of these reasons however, might be deduced by our current circumstances. After nearly a week of traveling, it appears we have reached our destination. And what a destination it is! We are currently in a small system, in the centre of it is a small white dwarf, barely outputting enough energy to counter the forces of gravity crushing at it's core. Maybe in the distant future, long after our own sun has gone out, this star may collapse to become a black hole or it's less hostile cousin, a neutron star. If in that case, it would most likely suck in it's only partner in the system: a lonely gas giant that is in orbit of the star. It's speed and orbit means that it takes several years to complete a single revolution of the star. It's size is not that much larger than Saturn or maybe Neptune. Yet, from what we can see, it's atmosphere and environment are far, far more turbulent than anything the Sol system could ever possess. Storms are present all over the atmosphere, with winds moving at super-sonic speeds. 17 Major storms dominate the planet, some of them the size of Earth or the Moon! Upon closer examination, each storm is divided into its own sub-storms and vortices. How such an intricate system can exist is magic in itself. All the laws of turbulence and physics say this is impossible, yet I can see it clearly with my own eyes!

Yet, as fascinating as this may be, it is nothing compared to the object in it's orbit.

The object in question appears to be an unknown device, probably of immeasurable age. I will describe its physical features and appearance first, for the record, before I go onto its other...'properties' so to speak.

The device itself consists of several components. The most obvious one appears to actually be self-dependent and unrelated to the main structure itself. The outer component is a large ring of sorts, around 15 Kilometers in diameter, and is nearly 3 kilometers wide. The portion of the ring facing the outside is made of some unknown metal, and is full of unknown systems and structures. It appears to be heavily armored, capable of taking great bombardment. The interior of the ring however, is what is its most fascinating feature. The interior of the ring appears to have been crafted similar to a planet of sorts. Gravitational generators keep it intact and running smoothly, but the ring's natural rotation appears to be the main source of gravity here, allowing an atmosphere to remain attracted to the surface. From what we can translate of the Shivan instruments, the gravity appears to be around Earth normal, as well as the atmosphere for that matter. It is amazing because once we looked at it from extreme magnification; we could see trees, birds and even animals! An entire eco-system exists there, consisting of desert regions, snow-filled canyons and even tropical paradises. It seems like the perfect vacation spot, or for us - the best spot to acquire some food and water.

However, as good as it may seem, the ring appears...incomplete somehow. As if it was more of the first prototype of a grand design, meant only to test certain features and then be done with. It lacks any advanced equipment or any area where a large population could exist. Apart from the basic design and the wild creatures, the ring appears abandoned.

Which might just be a good thing considering the structure that it is housed around.

The internal structure itself appears to be separate from the ring. It is in a starfish shape, except with only four massive arms stretching out to almost touch the ring as it rotates around. From tip to tip, the arms are nearly 10 Kilometers long, making it a somewhat tight fit. The arms themselves are almost 4 kilometers wide at the tip, and 2 kilometers thick. It expands into the main body, with a curvature on each side between itself and the arms next to it. The main body itself is thick and cylindrical, with a massive hole in the centre. This hole is more of a cylinder of sorts, nearly 6 Kilometers long and with a diameter of 4 Kilometers; it could easily allow a Colossus-sized vessel to pass through it...or a Sathanas for that matter. The installation appears somewhat dead, a remnant of a bygone era we never knew of. It’s origins appears to be completely different from that of the ring, and is much, much more older than it could ever be.

As of the moment, the external examination reveals no clue as to the creators of the installation, but whoever it was must have been far more advanced than any race in existence. Sensor readings show the installation producing in excess of one thousand Trillion Megatons of energy, far more than enough to power several stars at once. Where the energy comes from, or how it is just generated is totally unknown, but one must consider that the installation is most likely in standby mode, indicating a much larger power potential. What all this energy can be used for, I have nothing but a suspicion. Unfortunately, it is but a horrible, terrible suspicion that I hope never comes true. That will only be explained once we step onboard the installation, which might happen soon if the Shivans have their way.

What might be easier to explain however, is the origins of the outer ring. The materials that make up the ring are unknown, but yet bare similarity to those used in the Knossos device, leading me to believe that this may just be a creation of the Ancients.

Perhaps, millennia ago, they too stumbled onto this device and then decided to create this ring around it. Although why they actually built it is a mystery to me, one could possibly imagine how such an advanced civilization was capable of creating such a device. Perhaps it was in response to whatever was inside the installation, something with which to contain the horrors that lay within? Either way, we’ll know once we conduct our landing on the surface of the ring.

I’ve already ordered Gibson and Sargo to get everybody into the environmental suits and turn on the artificial gravity. Living in a zero G environment for the past several days will have affected all our bodies, so making sure being ready is priority now.

The transport won’t directly land onto the ring itself, but rather conduct a brief subspace jump into the atmosphere, and then attempt to do a safe crash-landing nearby a location which we have identified as a control centre. It’s a bit risky, but it’s also our only option here. None of the ships gathered around the installation is capable of planet fall, and this transport is our only option now.

That is the other interesting thing to note about this system. The Shivans have gathered here en-masse, as if preparing for some massive exodus.  From what we limited view we have, thousands of Shivan vessels are filling the space between the installation and the planet. They range from the smallest fighters to Lucifer class super-destroyers and the massive Sathanas Juggernaughts. No fleet the GTVA could muster can match what the Shivans wield here, and I doubt any real fleet could really match it. We’ve counted over a hundred Juggernaughts so far, along with over double that number of Lucifer destroyers. There are also a number of Shivan vessels of a totally unknown class. They are much larger than the Lucifer, yet smaller than the Sathanas. However, from their mere appearance, they appear to be capable of wielding just as much firepower as the Sathanas.

All these ships…why are they gathered here? What is this installation? And most importantly, why are we here? So many questions, so few answers and every time more information comes in, it only brings with it even more questions. I guess the answers will come only after we’ve been to the surface, at the least.

This is Admiral Bosch, signing off.
« Last Edit: December 26, 2004, 11:06:53 pm by 1259 »
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Awesome
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
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Me likes. It's definitely one of the better FS2 fanfics I've read in a while.

Just one little nitpick tho: wasn't the crewman's name Sarno? I'll check the audio files for FS2 again, but I'm sure that's what he was.
Spoon - I stand in awe by your flawless fredding. Truely, never before have I witnessed such magnificant display of beamz.
Axem -  I don't know what I'll do with my life now. Maybe I'll become a Nun, or take up Macrame. But where ever I go... I will remember you!
Axem - Sorry to post again when I said I was leaving for good, but something was nagging me. I don't want to say it in a way that shames the campaign but I think we can all agree it is actually.. incomplete. It is missing... Voice Acting.
Quanto - I for one would love to lend my beautiful singing voice into this wholesome project.
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Wow...one of the few fictions I've actually read through! Can't wait for the next installment :D

 

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Amazing work mate.
Can't wait for next installment. :D

 

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And the next installment! :D
edit: added chapter numbers to the various pieces, to keep track.
Edit2: wrong chapter number. Stupid me for trying to edit while half-asleep in the morning :(


Chapter 2[/u]

Several hours later, the scene outside Bosch's quarters was much, much more different. Although Bosch himself wasn't, the rest of them were. Everyone was in full environmental suits, covered from head to toe and with the mini-grav generators turned on. Unfortunately for most of them, this was the toughest part yet for them all. Adapting back to normal Earth gravity after nearly a week of zero-g was the hardest part, and quite a few of the people gathered were complaining about it too.

Except for Gibson that is and Sargo that is. Both were the first ones to get into the suits almost immediately after Bosch had ordered it. Of course, they had been complaining about it earlier too, but now at least they were somewhat used to it. Looking at the others, he cleared his throat, trying to catch there attention. When that didn't work, he tried again. Still no response.

Getting somewhat irritated at the group, he shouted out loud, finally attracting there attention. "Gentlemen! Calm down already and quit your god darn *****ing already!!"

After that, they all stopped and turned to look at him and Sargo, who was standing right next to him.

"I know the suits and the gravity are hard to bear, but we've still got a job to do." He paused for a second before smiling and continuing.

"Besides, haven't you guys been listening at all? We're going to Crash-land this flying bucket of bolts, which means you better get used to it fast, cause nothing is going to compare to the G's we'll be pulling off soon."

Seeing that they had calmed down a bit, he nodded and began the briefing. He was standing in for Bosch, who was not in the cargo deck holding the ETAK device and talking to the Shivans. They were coming up with a direct plan of action, not to mention modifying the controls so that Bosch could fly the ship down. Gibson was a bit uneasy with letting Bosch fly the ship down, even though he did have immense experience with flying as a pilot for the GTA of old. The man was much older now and his age could easily pose a risk to all of them. Gibson's own personal preference would have either been Sarno or John. Both of them were ace pilots in their own rights, with the former having flown the massive Ursa bomber and having an idea of how to handle large ships.

But still, Bosch had been adamant. He would fly them down, and without a risk. When hearing of Gibson's recommendations, he had only given a short laugh before simply saying "While Sarno may have flown an Ursa before, rest assured, I had plenty of experience flying such things myself. This transport will be no different. Rest assured Gibson, I will bring us down in one piece."

"Gibson, you may want to start now." His thoughts were interrupted as Sargo gave him a slight push, waking him up and bringing his mind back to the current situation.

Sargo leaned close in and whispered so only he and Gibson could hear. "Told you to get some sleep too. But nooooo, 'I'll be fine' you said. Nice job Gibson" He winked before standing up straight again and clearing his throat.

Gisbon just shook his head and nodded to everyone. Lacking any holographic machinery or suitable device to conduct the briefing, he motioned for everyone to follow him to a nearby window. The window had the view of the structure they were going to be boarding. Next to the window were crude chalk drawings of not only the outer ring, but a small section of the ring itself. It wasn't much, but at least it was better than nothing. Once everyone was in position and the jokes of how bad his and Sargo's drawings were over, he nodded to everyone and began the briefing.

"Ok then, let's start. First of all, this isn't art class, so you'll have to forgive the bad quality of drawing we see here." He joked, lightening up the mode a bit.

"As you all know, we are currently holding position above this rather strange ring-like structure. The mission is simple: We will be attempting to do a landing on this ring at this area." He pointed first to the ring, and then the small section he had drawn next to it.

"From the looks of it, we'll be landing in the start of a long canyon around 2 clicks in length. The entire canyon is covered in snow, so even if we do crash-land the impact should be a bit cushioned, at the least. Once we get down, our immediate objective is to set up a small base camp. Our environmental suits should protect us in the cold till we can either find a cave or some other natural shelter, or till we can build one. Either way if the transport is still functioning, we'll use it as base camp. We'll each be dividing into teams. Me, Bosch and John will be in one team and will stay back with the transport to try and repair any damage;. Sargo, Sarno and Terrick will be in the next. Sargo will be leader, your objective is to check out area A for any caves or natural formations we can use to shelter us against the cold. At the same time, Gerald, Ramayan and Dave will also roam the same area looking for any food we may be able to use. From what we can tell, there appears to be quite a lot of vegetation in the canyon, despite the cold. There might just be enough food available for us to eat, but it may just end up poisonous. Ramayan -"

He paused, looking for Ramayan at the back of the gathered group. He finally saw the dark brown face behind Terrick, looking back at him through the reflection of the suit's helmet glass. When Ramayan nodded, Gibson continued.

"Your the only one of us that's take any sort of course on vegetation and plant life, so you should be able to identify which plants are poisonous and which aren't. Therefore you'll be leader of this team. Water shouldn't be much of an issue since all we need to do is melt the snow."

Ramayan nodded. He didn't seem to have any problems with the issue.

"Raynold, Carlos and Venson, you'll take the final team. Venson, you're in charge."

"Aye Sir, what are we to do?" He replied in his slight Russian accent, his mouth almost totally obscured by the thick moustache and beard that took up quite a lot of his features. Gibson could already tell that he would be the most used to the environmental conditions they were going to go through.

"Simple." Gibson replied. "You'll be scouting around area B, and like team two you'll be searching for shelter as well. All of us will be armed with Hand-held weaponry in case we encounter anything hostile down there. If your team does encounter something hostile, fall back to the transport immediately. Nobody travels alone, and everyone has to be roped together to ensure it too. The terrain is slippery and we have no idea about the local wildlife either, so everyone be careful of any animals or wild creatures you see. If you also happen to find any piece of useful electronic equipment, don't touch it till it can be examined for booby-traps. I bet this ring has been abandoned for a reason and I'd rather not find out what it is till we're out of there. Everyone clear then? Any questions?"

He looked around the gathered group. They all looked pretty determined, if somewhat nervous, of what was to come. Then Gibson noticed a hand rise at the very back. Looking at the person raising it, he could make out Sarno's face through the face plate.

"Yes Sarno?" He asked, nodding at him to put the arm down.

Sarno lowered the arm and asked in a somewhat soft and sullen tone "Just a small question, but how do you intend to keep us all pinned down during landing? It's not like we actually have any seats or seatbelts for that matter you know."

Gibson nodded. This was something he was thinking about as well but fortunately he had found a somewhat simple solution for it.

"Simple, you'll be using your magnetic boots to hold you to the floor. Before landing, we'll all secure ourselves by using Magnetic locks to stick our suits to the wall. It should allow us to remain in one place, but the ride will definitely be bumpy."

Sarno nodded. It looked like the answer had satisfied him for the moment. Yet, he still had a somewhat puzzled expression on his face, as if he wanted to ask something, yet didn't have the guts to.

"Is there anything else Sarno? It looks like you've got another question in you there."

Sarno looked around to the others first, before looking right back at Gibson. "Well Sir...actually there is. I was hoping to ask, who is piloting us down? I don't think the Shivans would be able to survive all those G forces, or know what a soft landing is for that matter."

Gibson was afraid this question was going to come up. But might as well deal with it now rather than later.

"Well, the latest news is that none other than our fearless leader will be flying us down to the surface itself. He's already talked to the Shivans and they are working on setting a proper control system as we speak."

Upon hearing this, the room went silent. All the personnel gathered simply stared at Gibson, putting him in a somewhat uncomfortable position. Sarno was quite literally aghast with surprise. He obviously had been expecting to be chosen to pilot the ship down.
One of the others spoke first, shattering the silence a few seconds later. It was Terrick.

"Respectfully speaking sir, but why is the Admiral flying us in? Isn't Sarno or John a better choice? I mean, the GTVA put him as an Admiral because he's too old to fly, for heaven's sake!"

Gibson simply gave Terrick a glare and was about to reply when a voice from the very rear interrupted them.

"If it was true that they promoted people to Admiral just for their age, Mr. Terrick, then we'd also be seeing a lot more Neo-Terran Fronts." Everyone turned around in surprise to look at whom had just spoken. Upon seeing who it was however, all of them quickly saluted as Bosch stepped through the doorway. How long had he been standing there without anybody noticing? Standing and watching as his men being briefed on the activity they would follow on the ring below? Gibson simply had no idea, and instead followed the rest, saluting in respect to the old man.

Under normal circumstances, Bosch's frame wasn't very large, and nor was he well-muscled either. The past year working behind a desk and away from active service had reduced his body to a mere shadow of what it used to be during his prime years. Under the Zero-G environment they had endured over the past few days, Bosch's condition had worsened even more, and the signs were clearly showing now. The old man had been capable of moving about easily in the Zero G conditions, but now his walk was reduced into a slow stagger, barely being able to move the suit that enveloped his entire body. To him it must have felt like walking with lead weights, and the expression on his face as he moved from one corner to the other simple proved it.

He continued to speak, his voice low and somewhat weak from the strain of walking around. He obviously was tired and from the looks of it, about ready to collapse.

"Stand easy men." Bosch nodded at those gathered after saluting back. Once everyone's arms had dropped, he nodded again and continued to speak.

"I understand your concerns Terrick. I am indeed an old man, as well as somewhat unfit from my earlier days, but I've also got a lot of experience. Tell me, have you ever crash-landed any spacecraft into a planet before?"

He looked at all the men gathered before continuing. "Have any of you done the same, for that matter?"

Everyone simply shook their heads except for Gibson. He was the only other person here with as much flight experience - if not more - than Bosch himself, but he had almost no knowledge of the Shivan controls or the ship itself - something which only Bosch knew in this case.

"Point taken Sir, my apologies." Sarno said, somewhat embarresed.

Bosch frowned for a second. His tone became somewhat agitated. "What are you apologizing for pilot? You had a valid point in this case and you expressed it. In fact - " Bosch paused looking first at Sarno and then at John. Then he sighed before continuing. "Now that you mention it, there is a good chance I might just black out during the trip itself. I want both of you stationed inside the cockpit area itself. It's rather large, so space shouldn't be an issue. If anything happens to me, you'll have to take over the flight. Understood?"

Sarno's features turned to that one in surprise. Internally, Gibson applauded Bosch. This was one of the reasons he had managed to hold the NTF as long as he did. If Bosch was good at one thing, it was handling the men under his charge.

At least now the main issue seemed to be dealt and over with. Bosch nodded to the men and continued.

“You’ve all heard the plans, and you’ve all heard the risks. I’ve talked to the Shivans and we’ll be making our attempt after 24 hours. I suggest everybody get some rest before we go. The food container has been unlocked, so all the food is available for consumption. I expect each and every one of you to fill yourselves and enjoy the food.”

Bosch paused. His facial features turned morose as he looked down before continuing. “24 Hours from now, we’ll all either be dead or on the surface. In either case we’ll need all the energy we can get. That is all, dismissed.”

With that, Bosch moved towards his room on the other side of the group. The crew parted to give him way as he left. Not one person spoke a word as he walked through and went to his room. Once the door closed, Gibson looked back to those gathered. There was an uncomfortable silence for a few seconds, but finally Sargo spoke up, shattering it.

“Well, that’s about it. Who’s up for some proper food?”

A general murmur of agreement rose up from the others as they dispersed for lunch. Gibson sighed. This was going to be one of the longest 24 hours of his life.
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Offline FireCrack

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more... more... MORE!!!!!!!

i cant wait for chapter 3
actualy, mabye not.
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Offline Grug

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that was chapter 3 :p

but yeah, keep up the typing! :D

 

Offline Singh

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Actually, chapter 2.

Blame me for typing early in the morning when im clearly half asleep :nervous:
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Offline WMCoolmon

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Suggestion, Singh, proofread your writing when fully awake. I caught a couple of oddly-worded sentences and misspelled words that weren't in the first two. ;)

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more... more... MORE!!!!!!!

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Offline Singh

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Well, chapter 3 as promised.

Chapter 3[/u]

This is the final audio log of Admiral Aken Bosch, Ex-leader of the Neo Terran Front.

Unfortunately, due to a lack of any additional tapes onboard the Shivan transport, or in our supply for that matter, this will be my final entry into my logs till we are able to either acquire more tapes or another recorder of some sorts.

As I speak, my crew is resting and preparing for what may just be the hardest experience in their lives. The Shivans departed the transport several hours ago, leaving us as the only people onboard. It is quite apparent that they do not wish to come down to the ring with us. Whether it is the gravity that is driving them away, or something on the ring itself, I don’t know. What I do know is that they were quick to change the entire layout of this Azreal’s cockpit, which is something of a surprise considering the change of biology it has to encompass.

At the least however, they are supremely competent shipbuilders. It took less than 8 hours to change the entire layout of the cockpit from one that accepted a neural interface, to one that accepted all kinds of analogue input, not to mention hook up what few display screens we have to show gauges and output.

As much of a blessing as it seems, I am also very hesitant about the entire matter. The Shivans have definitely been hospitable to us….perhaps a little too hospitable for that matter.

It may seem that I’m being over-cautious over the entire thing, especially when I should be celebrating our achievement here, as the initial objectives I started with have all but been achieved. The Neo Terra Front was exactly that: nothing but a Front to put up against the GTVA as I scavenged about the wrecks of the ancients, looking for clues that would eventually bring me here and to the Shivans. The pilots and soldiers of the NTF were mere cattle, driven by their hatred and fears of the Vasudans. At the time, it was all too simple to just use it to my advantage and meet my immediate needs. But then it grew and took over, and I was powerless to stop it.

But I will not argue with Human memory, or whatever verdict history gives on my role in the human race. My role was played to the bloody end, and it is something that I cannot deny, even if it means a legacy forever crowned with infamy.

Little do the fools know, my actions were planned not by my hatred of the Vasudans, but for my love of humanity. My only objective was to end the tragic decades of hate and misunderstandings between our species and the Shivan’s, and probably to bring some hope to the future of mankind. I succeeded in all the tasks I set out to do, and I should be filled with joy.

Yet upon reflection, I must ask myself, have I really succeeded?

Although contact has been made with the Shivans, they have mentioned little to me of why they attacked us or the reason for the First and Second Great Wars. Whenever I ask this question, the Shivan hive mind is simply evasive and cryptic in its replies. From what I am able to grasp, the Shivans were definitely waiting for us to come about, and their attacks were deliberate. Only the reason of why remains beyond my grasp now. What could motivate such a race to be so hostile to anything it encounters, yet be so hospitable to us?

They still refuse to answer the question of why did they spare us and not the ancients. They also continue to insist that a problem exists, one that is larger than the Ancients, Humans and Vasudans combined, possibly extending past this universe as well. But they have yet to tell me, what is this problem exactly?

The only thing that they have told me is that all will be explained here, at this ring and that the truth will be revealed when we begin our journey. But what is this journey they speak of?

What wild reason lies behind this mysterious fog the Shivans have clouded themselves in? Perhaps it is connected to the number of ships gathered here, all standing in unison to watch our odyssey to the Ring below us. They have to be waiting for something to happen, something directly related to us, this ring and the installation that hangs in the midst of it all.

Either way, from the looks of it our answers won’t be ready for another several hours yet. It is my hope that this ring will prove to be the final piece of the puzzle, leading to the answers for all my questions. But it may just end up bringing up a larger problem and more questions. Either way, we will never know till we can land on the ring.

Yet…I cannot help but think. Perhaps in my earlier logs I was right; I may just end up being a fool here, having lead my people into this vast desert, only to die. Although I came here looking for answers to save humanity, I may just end up leaving it with questions that only serve to doom it.

End log.
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 
:yes: It's still going great. Maybe it needs some little corrections here and there for a final revised version but it's very good so far.
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Offline WMCoolmon

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I don't know what you're talking about, I didn't see any errors in chap 3. :p

Keep it up! :D

(At first I thought that Bosch would learn that the larger threat was The Flood, and the story would tie things in to Halo. As they were describing landing in snow, I kept having flashbacks to 'Assault on the Control Room'. :p)
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Offline Singh

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Originally posted by WMCoolmon

(At first I thought that Bosch would learn that the larger threat was The Flood, and the story would tie things in to Halo. As they were describing landing in snow, I kept having flashbacks to 'Assault on the Control Room'. :p)


If it were only that simple.......
:nervous: :shaking:
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(