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Offline FireCrack

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
Awesome!

I hope you can get a job.
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
"Your ever-constant homily says flaw is discipline, the patron saint of imperfection frees us from our sin. And if our transcendental lift shall find a final floor, then Man will know the death of God where wonder was before."

 

Offline Singh

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Chapter 10[/u]
A Mask of Tragedy[/i]

They were at the base of the structure around ten minutes later, and the entire group had stopped several feet ahead of them. The fog had cleared mostly, revealing the ancient structure in full. Raynolds glanced back at Terrick, who was behind him. Wondering why they had stopped, Raynolds was about to ask the nearest person – Gerald in this case – what was going on. Instead, as he approached, he saw where Gerald – and the rest of the team – was looking. Following the gaze, Raynolds took pause and tried to process what he was seeing.

On the side of the structure, at each of the floors going up, the doors had been closed the last time they had come here. Raynolds had distinctively remembered being denied permission to open those doors, despite the possibility of them containing supplies. They had left the doors as-is.

But now, all of the doors were open. It was too dark inside to see anything, but from the looks of it, something might have been in those rooms at one point of time. Raynolds thought he could see some white material reflecting the dim sunlight, but he couldn’t exactly be sure.

From the front of the group, Bosch spoke up.

“This isn’t a very good sign. When doors open up on their own, it means that either the place is haunted by ghosts, or some unknown mechanism is starting to activate. It’s best we make top speed for the control chamber.”

The others nodded. This was eerie, to say the least. With the howling of the wind gone, only a silence hung over the entire installation…much like an ancient graveyard. It was so quite, that Raynolds could swear he could hear his own heartbeat. The group slowly started to climb up the long flight of stairs.

Along the way, Raynolds glanced back at Terrick, who was struggling with the bag he was carrying. It contained all the tools they had used for digging the graves earlier, as well as some other trinkets. Raynolds stopped and turned around, he pointed at the bag and asked.

“Terrick – need to change bags? Its best not to keep the last member bogged down.”

Terrick, for his part, simply shook his head. He pointed to one of the straps on the bag and shook his head, cursing.

“Nah…stupid strap refuses to stay on my shoulder for some reason – most likely shoddy workmanship I bet. I’ll be allright.” He indicated for Raynolds to continue on.

Raynold’s didn’t go on however, instead he waited for Terrick to right the bag. He turned around then and continued.

Glancing back, Raynolds spoke to Terrick softly, so that the others wouldn’t hear.

“Er….Terrick, mind if I ask you a small question?”

Terrick looked up and nodded.

“Go ahead.”

Raynolds glanced down to catch his step – he was now on the first level while the others had reached the second already.
“I hope you don’t mind…but if you do go back, who are going to stay with? I don’t think the GTVA are going to be very happy to see us back again.”

Terrick paused and stopped in his tracks. He thought for a second, before glancing around a bit. Finally, he looked down and sighed. Looking back at Raynolds, he replied.

“I don’t know Raynolds. Most likely, I’ll end up going to my sister’s place, if it’s still standing. But there is a better chance of her throwing me out than anything else, especially after all we’ve done for him.” Terrick spat out the last word with a burst of anger and rage. It was clear who he was referring to.

Raynolds sadly shook his head and replied in an equally angry tone.

”You’re probably right…after what we’ve done in his name, I doubt anyone is going to accept us back anymore. And now he wants to abandon us? Get real!”

Terrick paused for a moment. He looked out at the field behind them before turning back and continuing the climb. As they climbed, they continued to talk.

“Yeah, but at least we got the Shivans at our back – at the very least, I bet they could prove we were right.”

Terrick responded, wheezing a bit from the effort in carrying the bag. Raynolds glanced back, but continued nonetheless.

“Maybe…but Bosch still hasn’t told us how they are the key to saving humanity. Technically, we’ve already saved humanity – hell, as long as the Shivans stop attacking, everyone should be safe…”

He heard a slight thunk sound from behind him, along with Terricks reply.

“Hold on a sec, just gotta adjust the strap again.”

Raynolds was at the second level now. He leaned against the central structure to his left, not looking back. Instead, he looked up at the door and the others. Bosch and Gibson had already made it to the top, with the former working at the control panel. The others were at the level just above them, and some were sitting on the stairs and resting as they waited for the door to open. Raynolds continued to speak, looking down at the ground. He closed his eyes, thinking carefully as he spoke.

“That bastard, Bosch. All he thinks about is this mission for humanity. He still hasn’t specified what needs to be done, or how he’s going to go about doing it. For all we know, we could just be dooming everyone by pissing off the Shivans in some way or the other.”

“yeah, maybe. But we could just be pissing them off by not doing what they want.” Terrick replied from behind him.

Raynolds looked up at Bosch and the others again, before continuing.

“Maybe…but still, I cant help but think that there is something that Bosch isn’t telling us. And it’s probably the fact that he doesn’t know what to do either.”

Raynolds paused. He continued, somewhat angrily. “You know what? I bet he doesn’t have a damn clue about this entire operation either, and that he’s guessing as well. Whatever is up at the installation will be his ticket out, and if it’s not what he wants, I bet he’s going to find some good excuse to get rid of us as well. What do you think, Terrick?”

There was no reply from behind him. Frowning, he simply shook his head and sighed. Closing his eyes for a second, he whirled around, speaking.

“Terrick – if you’re having too much troub-“

He paused mid-sentence as he opened his eyes only to see…nothing.

Only the bag lay on the ground behind him, leaving no sign of where Terrick had gone to. Frowning, he called out, looking left and right for where Terrick might have gone.

“Terrick? Where the hell did you go?”

Walking down the steps, he reached the first level and looked around the structural piece there as well as on the other side. Still no sign of Terrick, however.

The others saw this and Gibson called out from the top, his voice echoing off the walls of the canyon. “Raynolds – what’s going on? Where’s Terrick?”

Raynolds just looked back up and shook his head. He shouted back, just as loud.

“I don’t know – he just vanished! I can’t find him anywhere!”

Gibson frowned again, and was about to reply when his eyes went wide in surprise. He shouted something at Raynolds, but the voice was drowned out by the sound of something landing very heavily behind him.

Whirling around, he looked around, trying to identify the source. Finally, he looked down and gasped. The shock forced him to take a step or two back. Lying in front of him was a body, covered almost entirely in blood and missing most it's limbs and it's head. The environmental suit had been breached and ripped apart in several locations by what appeared to be teeth marks. Then realization hit Raynolds like a kick to the gut: this was Terrick's body – but how did it get to how it was...or more importantly, what dropped it behind him?

A low growl from above him answered the question. Raynolds slowly looked up at the source of the growl. Perched just above him on the divider between the sides of the staircase was it. What it was, however, bore similarity to a myth, a legend from old human history, perhaps. It appeared to be a giant lizard, on a similar scale in size to a large dinosaur or such. However, this was no dinosaur.

The skin had a motley pattern of different shades of green, yellow and brown, and was almost entirely covered in small spikes and scales. The spikes seemed to be in significant prominence around the creature's eyes and around the triangular head. The body itself was huge and appeared heavily armored. Raynolds was surprised that it could even perch itself on the support without breaking it, or the small, thick hind legs upon which it rested. The forward arms were short, yet thick and muscular, ending in hands that held an opposable thumb and four fingers worth of incredibly sharp and incredibly dangerous claws. On the back were two massive wings that slowly unfurled themselves, stretching out for several meters. From the other side of the barrier, a long tail appeared. What was most shocking, however, was the blood all over the mouth and the teeth. An arm stuck out from the side of the mouth, still encased in it's environmental suit, and as Raynolds watch, the thing took it in, biting the suit and cracking it open easily.

It stared at him with bright green eyes that seemed to shine much like a jewel would. The eyes seemed to drill holes into his head with a burning glare, one that prevented him from looking away. The calls of the other members seemed to disappear as he continued to stare into the eyes; it's pull seemingly unbreakable. Finally, after what seemed like ages, Raynolds took another step back and then blinked.

In that one blink, the world disappeared around Raynolds. He was no longer on the ring, or indeed, anywhere near the structure he stood on just a fraction of a second ago. The world here was far, far different. He was standing in the middle of a tiled courtyard, around a hundred meters long and several meters wide. To his left was a stairway leading to another smaller courtyard that was a little ways below this one. Surrounding this courtyard were several very tall, very high structures – each with significant windows, and more surprisingly, he could see people in those windows. He instantly recognized them as apartment complexes; albiet, significantly old fashioned ones. He'd seen them in history books – such structures were only seen on Earth, and even then apartment complexes like these were rare, not to mention were torn down several years before the subspace jump collapsed. They had been replaced with the standard light-plate  alloy that made up of most of the GTVA's structures.

His thoughts were interrupted, however, by a loud tapping sound coming from nearby. It was constant, repetitive...as if someone was typing away. Looking around, Raynolds traced the sound and found where it was coming from: there was somebody nearby. The person was male, and was seated in what appeared to be a small patio or the like that was in the garden. The person was around a dozen or so meters away, and appeared to be typing furiously away at something. He didn't turn or look back at Raynolds.

Deciding that standing around would do him nothing, Raynolds took a step forward and tried to say something, only to find that he couldn't move his feet at all. Looking down, Raynolds saw in shock and horror that his feet had disappeared into a black void that slowly rose up. He could still feel them, oddly, but it was just that he couldn't move them an inch. He looked up again, only to find that the surroundings had changed once again. This time he was in a dark room. It was small, and completely plain. To one side was a small bunk, and to another a small toilet. He recognized it immediately as a jail cell of sorts...but whose.

That of the creations, of course

He whirled around in surprise, unsure where the voice had come from. There was nobody behind or around him.

“Who are you?!” he shouted out, looking around for a possible source, or speakers.

Such ignorance...it is....amusing. Typical, of a creation.

The voice spoke out again. This time, Raynolds could trace it; it came from outside the cell door. There was a small window built into the door, where food was passed through it. The window was open now, but all Raynolds could see past it was a black mist. The low light in the room wasn't enough to penetrate the darkness beyond...yet, he could make out a figure in the darkness. It was moving towards him, slowly, steadily. Against, the voice spoke.

The important question is never always who....but why.

The figure was at the end of the myst now, and Raynolds could almost make it out. It was definitely humanoid. He blinked, trying to focus on it. But within that blink, the environment once again changed. This time, the cell was gone, leaving only the black myst surrounding him.

Suddenly, a massive force hit him in the front, pushing him backwards several feet. The scene changed again, this time back to where he had just been. Something flew over him, blocking the sky and the installation above them, but he couldn't exactly make out what it was, and within a second, it was gone. The voice lingered on however, leaving him with a parting sentence.

We are but his creations, just like you are...but soon, the tragedy in which he masks our fate will be removed, and the guilty shall suffer for their sins.
With that, the voice faded away, leaving him with short of breath and laying on the ground. He could hear voices nearby – that of Gibson and Sargo. They were shouting something, but Raynolds couldn't understand it.His hearing his was muddled up. He blinked, trying to catch his breath.

When he opened his eyes, though, the lizard thing was directly above him and staring right at him again.

Raynolds cursed, and immediately tried to scramble up. The creature opened it's mouth, revealing something shocking between it's crooked teeth. Terrick's head was still caught there, staring down at Raynolds with an expression of horror and pain.

Time slowed down, and the creature moved to swat Raynolds with it's upper limbs, when, out of nowhere salvation came.

Actually, that was somewhat of an overstatement. What actually came was a pickaxe. It rotated in it's journey through the air, and lodged itself straight into the creature's right eye, causing it to roar in pain and miss Raynolds completely.

Looking at it's source, Raynolds could see Gibson and Venson picking up several tools from their bags, preparing to throw it at the creature. He could hear what they were saying now. They were both shouting at him to run to them now.

And he did. Raynolds got off the ground and began to run up the stairs. He was on the second level, and had only two more to go before he reached Gibson. For their part, both the pair threw whatever they could at the creature to distract it.

Raynolds turned left at the beginning of the next level, ducking past the barrier and leaving it between him and the creature. Just as he crossed the threshold, however, the creature crashed into the struture behind him, collapsing the wall section and breaking it. It roared in pain, nearly deafening him. The debris pelted his back and his legs, causing him to slip and nearly fall face-first onto the stairs. He managed to recover, however, and continued to run up as fast as he could.

But niether Gibson and Sargo were up on the top floor. Instead, he saw both their backs as they were moving away from him and into the hallway. He glanced back, and then realized why. In the sky behind him, where dozens of the things, all flying to their location, and all more than likely hell-bent in killing them all. Then he looked back up at the platform....and saw him.

Bosch was looking up at the creatures as well, before he then turned his gaze downwards at Raynolds, standing stiffly at attention. He had a somewhat sad expression on his face, and simply shook his head. Behind him, Raynolds could see that the doorway was slowly closing shut.

It was only then he realized what Bosch had done, and was doing. He had ordered the other two in, and was closing the doorway. But at this rate, Raynolds wouldn't be able to make it in time.

Bosch was leaving him out here – out here to die.

No. He wasn't allowing that to happen – not after what he had to go through! And those things...that voice.

They met eye contact for a second, and it only confirmed what Raynolds had feared. Bosch then turned around and headed for the doorway.

Using all of his strength, Raynolds ran up the stairways, not even stopping for a breath. He ran up the staircase, not caring of what was behind him. He could feel the creature there somewhat, but it was still recovering from the impact against the wall. However, it would be after him again within a few seconds.

He ran up to the third floor, and changed sides again, in an attempt to dodge the thing. He could hear a loud roar from behind him as it recovered and began the chase again. There was one last flight of stairs to go before he made it up, however. Raynolds took a breath and didn't stop. He ran all the way up the stairs, making a new personal record for himself. He didn't know what made him run up that fast, or how he managed it – it must have been the adrenaline just then. Either way, a few seconds later, he found himself at the edge of the platform, witnessing the massive doors slowly closing ahead of him.

But his speed had paid off – there was still some space left in the centre of the door, near the bottom. He ran forwards as fast as he could, hoping to make it before it either closed, or closed before he was all the way through. The world slowed down as a second adrenaline rushed through his viens.

It was going to be close – but he had a shot at makig it! When Raynolds was around a meter out, he leapt through the air – the door still had around a half a meter wide gap, and it was closing really slow. He was going to make it! A feeling of joy went through him as he flew through the air – nothing was going to stop him – not that stupid creature, not Bosch.

And then, the door suddenly sped up as the mechanism locked it to place, closing it completely. Raynolds only had time to bring down his head and lower the tumble before slamming into the door at full speed. He cried in pain as he hit it, crumpling it and falling to the ground.

A second later, however, he staggered back up, pounding away at the door. He shouted, hoping that someone would hear on the other side.

“God damn you, Bosch! Open this door, open it now!! I'm right here, damnit!”

Then he heard a low growl from behind him. It was the same one as before. Turning around, he saw the thing had landed behind him, and it was now slowly moving towards him. But it moved too slow...as if it was just approaching him, before it then stepped to the side. Behind it, Raynolds could see the other creatures had landed at the bottom of the structure, and were working their way up. He tried looking around for a weapon, something – anything to help him against that thing. If he was going to die, then he may as well do it fighting.

You may try to fight...but know that your fate is not to die.
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
That voice...Raynolds recognized it immediately. It came from the stairs, slowly revealing itself as it climbed upwards. He moved back in horror, as he saw what it truly was. As it approached him, he tried to ward it off, reaching for a shovel that lay on the ground.

But the Shovel somehow moved out of his reach, as if with a will of it's own. He took a step back away from it, surprised at what had just happened. He looked back at the thing that had just come up the stairs; but had one been there to see the reflection in his eyes, they would have seen nothing. Indeed, if anyone else had been there, they would have seen nothing. Yet, Raynolds saw it. And as it approached, he let out a ear-pitching scream that shattered the silence of the canyon as it spoke to him, slowly, silently.

Our fates are connected, for death will claim neither of us...but it can claim him. Our struggle will go on beyond this ring, at last. Many worlds await our return, but they will have to wait till we have served our revenge.
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
<contents removed by somebody secret>

Nothing here citizen, move along, move along.

<puts up a 'there was nothing here' sign and moves off>


« Last Edit: December 10, 2005, 12:14:54 pm by Singh »
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline FireCrack

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
Que?
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
"Your ever-constant homily says flaw is discipline, the patron saint of imperfection frees us from our sin. And if our transcendental lift shall find a final floor, then Man will know the death of God where wonder was before."

 

Offline NGTM-1R

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
I saw tha-*neuralized*
"Load sabot. Target Zaku, direct front!"

A Feddie Story

 

Offline Fenrir

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
I see what you did there.

 

Offline FireCrack

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
I still have no idea what singh meant by that crap...
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
"Your ever-constant homily says flaw is discipline, the patron saint of imperfection frees us from our sin. And if our transcendental lift shall find a final floor, then Man will know the death of God where wonder was before."

  

Offline Goober5000

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
Me neither. :wtf: Something about trains and fleet statistics.  Do they really have trains in space?

 

Offline FireCrack

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
Calculations for evacuationg some innane number of persons, each alloted a 2x2x2m cube, via "trains", the Shivan Armada, and The GTVA Fleet.
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
"Your ever-constant homily says flaw is discipline, the patron saint of imperfection frees us from our sin. And if our transcendental lift shall find a final floor, then Man will know the death of God where wonder was before."

 

Offline Kie99

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
:wtf: Well, that was random.
"You shot me in the bollocks, Tim"
"Like I said, no hard feelings"

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
indeed.
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline flakked alive

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
excellent story pilot.......... :rolleyes:
apart from the spelling and grammatical errors excellent story.*that is how you spell the gram word, right ?*

just a few gripes though.
the vasudans as The Great Destroyers ? :wtf: i dont think so, either the shivans tricked bosch really good or bosch trick everybody incl shivans. most clearly the ancients were wiped out by the shivans (fs1 tgw) *i still have that game somewhere hmmm must find it* and vasuda prime is no longer habitable thanx to the shivans THE GREAT DESTROYERS  *echo in background* :D so somebody got tricked big time .................hmmm plot anyone?

all in all i would love to see a cgi movie or ani of this story
excellent work man.

hope you find work.
"BLASTED FLAKK TURRETS !"
*extracts shrapnel from a** with tweezers

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
excellent story pilot.......... :rolleyes:
apart from the spelling and grammatical errors excellent story.*that is how you spell the gram word, right ?*

just a few gripes though.
the vasudans as The Great Destroyers ? :wtf: i dont think so, either the shivans tricked bosch really good or bosch trick everybody incl shivans. most clearly the ancients were wiped out by the shivans (fs1 tgw) *i still have that game somewhere hmmm must find it* and vasuda prime is no longer habitable thanx to the shivans THE GREAT DESTROYERS  *echo in background* :D so somebody got tricked big time .................hmmm plot anyone?

all in all i would love to see a cgi movie or ani of this story
excellent work man.

hope you find work.


Ah...the vasudans. They aren't the great destroyers, heavens no! dunno where you got that bit (might be an error - point out the para and i'll edit). They are related in a sense though, as they were attacked by them, after they betrayed the ancients....

...but indeed....one must ask in this case, the question of not why they betrayed the ancients, but of how far they were willing to go before it happened...or indeed.....was Bosch's assumption of where they got the reference to the Great Destroyers right.

*silently disappears....
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
Bosch glanced back as he heard something thump at the door, just after it slammed shut. He paused, considering what he had just done. Raynolds had been too far, too injured to make it back in time before one of those creatures attempted to keep the door open.

He considered the creatures for a moment. Had they been gaurdians left behind by the Ancients? Or were they merely creatures that had evolved in this eco-system? In either case, they bore an extremely uncanny similarity to some old Earth legends.

Bosch paused, turning half-way to the door to look at it. He looked at it in grim sadness, a twinge of guilt nagging his mind at what he had just done. Of course, it was justified. Sacrificing the few for the many, the dying for the living. Yet....yet why did he feel that the decision he had made was a mistake.

He turned back to the rest, whom were already heading towards the elevator. Gibson had stopped half-way to make sure Bosch was following. He stared at Bosch with a hard glare, and one could easily see that he was not pleased at what happened either.

Bosch's expressions hardened, and his mind came to rest. He had done what was necessary, nothing more, nothing less. If he let such things get to him now, then the  objective would never be complete.

With as much steadiness he could muster, Bosch turned away from the door and began to  walk towards the lift at the end of the corridor. Gibson took up formation right behind him as those on the elevator cleared some space to let him through.

He counted the heads. Raynolds and Terrick had fallen to the creatures. Sarno and Ramayan had both perished in the crash onto the ring.

That left only him, Gibson, Sargo, Venson, Carlos, Gerald, Dave and John.

Eight survivors, out of the many million NTF soldiers, citizens and crew that had served to bring them here. In essence, humanity's fate indirectly rested on their shoulders now.

He only prayed that he didn't loose anymore.

Walking onto the lift, he looked around at the faces gathered. Nearly all were looking towards the door. He himself glanced at the door for a minute, out of respect – and regret – for what he had just done.

Then he looked back down at the control panel, and adjusted the controls. The lift began to slowly descend into the darkness below.

But as they were doing so, Bosch noticed something, or rather heard it. It was a large banging, coming from the door. The last thing he saw before the lift went below the floor was the impression of a fist, or something in the door as it beat at the metal, pushing it in.

But then they were gone, the lift speeding up as it went toward the bottom.

**************

When they hit the bottom, everyone piled out of the elevator and into the blue corridor. The lights were still on, and so were the symbols and pictures.

As they walked down the corridors, a few of the men stopped to examine the pictures, especially the one of the Vasudan. But Bosch and Gibson both prodded them along, moving them down the corridor and towards the end.

When the doors opened up, they all looked around at the canyon. Unlike last time, Bosch noted that the wind wasn't very much – not more than a pleasently light breeze, actually. Stepping out, he did notice, however, that the light bridge had switched off by default.

Frowning, he nodded to the others to follow as he moved towards the control panel. He reset the bridge controls, and within a second the bridge came up.

“Come on, let's go before it resets itself.” Bosch said to Gibson and the others, indicating for them to get on. Most of the men stepped onto the bridge rather trepidly and carefully, not trusting it's integrity.

But once they were on, the group began to march off again, heading towards the other end. They moved in silence, not a single person talking about anything. The silence continued, oppressing Bosch. Not even the breeze did anything to break it, and the sounds of their footsteps echoing on the bridge was their only company.

When he reached the other end, Bosch was the first person on, somewhat glad to finally step foot on solid ground. He swore that if it weren't for the fact that his arm was in a cast, he'd kneel down and kiss the ground.

Looking around, he saw Gibson, Venson and Sargo step off the bridge and onto the ground. Behind them, Gerald and Dave were about to get off, with Carlos and John right behind them.

Then it happened.

Bosch didn't know which he heard first, the shout of surprise, or the explosion.

The Emmitors for the bridge that were embedded into the cliff on the other side sparked and exploded, setting off a chain reaction that ripped through the entire chain upto where the men had been walking. The bridge underneath Carlos and John immediately vanished, and they plummeted almost immediately into the chasm below, screaming as they vanished into the darkness.

The section near the other two, however, lasted for a second longer – just enough for both to leap at the ledge. The bridge disappeared before they could make contact though, and Dave was unable to reach the ledge, leaving him flailing for any reach on the cliff wall, to no avail, and he, too disappeared into the abyss.

That was when Bosch saw where Gibson was.

******

“For the love of god, whomever is up there, don't let go of my legs! Pull us up, pull us up now!” Gibson shouted up at the others as he hung off the cliff by his boots. Behind him, Venson and Sargo had already grabbed onto his legs, lying near the cliff edge. It was a very precarious position, to say the least.

Looking back down, he saw Gerald, who was barely hanging on. His right hand was clasped firmly to both of Gibson's. He looked down at the abyss below, and then back up to the others.

“Hold on! We'll pull you up.” Sargo shouted from behind Gibson. But they didn't move at all. Instead, Gibson slipped down further.

Then he realized in shock and horror what must have been happening. The snow had melted, turning the entire ledge and cliff face into ice. Although both Sargo and Venson were strong enough to pull them up, with no grip, there was an equally good chance they would all fall off.

But still, they couldn't give up.

“Bosch, grab my leg if you can and pull, help us up!” Venson shouted.

“Already there, I'm doing my best!” the response came back. Gibson looked down at Gerald and only shook his head.

“hold on...it'll be allright.”

But Gerald wasn't looking down, nor was he looking at the others. He was staring right at Gibson a rather sad expression on his face. He had seen the others slip, and he knew what was happening.

“Gibson...” he whispered.

“Just hold on, Gerald. I'm not about to loose you too.”

Suddenly, they slipped even further, dropping several inches. A pile of slush flew past Gerald's head, barely missing him.

“The ice is melting too fast! I can't get a proper grip!” Bosch's reply came. There was some tugging however, and Gibson realized that what he was saying was probably true. He could feel them struggling to pull both back. However, the weight was simply too much for the ledge to handle.

“Let me go, Gibson.”

No! I am Not about to loose another man. We've already lost too many.”

“You'll all die if you don't let me go, and it'll be to waste.” Gerald spoke. Oddly, his voice was calm, relaxed. Almost as if....

“Gibson, just let me go....” Gerald whispered again.

”No!” Gibson frowned, concentrating harder. He looked to see if he couldn't swing over to the wall and grab a foot or hand-hold. No such luck. The wall was covered with ice and extremely smooth. Besides, that idea hadn't exactly worked for John either.

“Then I will just have to let go myself.” Gerald said.

With that, Gerald's grip on Gibson's hands released itself, letting go. Desperately, Gibson tried to reach out again and grab him again, only to fail.

“No!” he shouted as he watch Gerald plummet to the darkness below, his hand outstretched up and looking at Gibson in the eye.

“NO!” he shouted again, as Sargo and Venson finally got a grip as the weight was far less, and pulled Gibson up.

Gibson fell onto the snow, and sighed, closing his eyes. Within a minute, they had just lost half of their remaining team. He finally opened his eyes, and looked on as Bosch got up from where he was helping to Sargo and Venson, both of whom looked down the canyon after their fallen comrades.

Bosch's expressions were still as stern and steady as ever. But Gibson could see the quiver on his face, the shaking in his hands. He knew that Bosch too had been hit by what happened. Yet, the man was somehow not letting it get to him. Almost as if....

Gibson's eyes narrowed for a second as he looked at Bosch and asked.

“What happened there? Why did the bridge explode?”

Bosch simply shrugged. “No clue. I entered the exact same settings as before. The system's old, something must have malfunctioned, I guess.”

Gibson couldn't quite put it down, but there was something in the way Bosch said that last sentence that bugged him. Yet, it was a good excuse. This ring was old, that much was for sure.

Bosch turned to Sargo and Venson, before glancing at Gibson and then continuing.

“We have to keep moving. If we stay here any longer, we have no idea when those creatures might just fly in. Secure the ETAK, lets move.” Bosch nodded at the bag which contained the ETAK. It had been thrown aside as the group had tried to frantically rescue Gerald. Gibson headed to it and picked it up.

Within the minute, the entire group was inside the doorway leading to the capsule chamber. Gibson was the last one to go in. He stared at the cliff for a few seconds, before turning around and walking into the chamber. The doors closed shut behind him shutting off from his view the place where he had seen his friends all die. He vowed to come back here one day, and set up a proper grave, but sadly, fate would see that he never got to fulfill that promise.
« Last Edit: January 28, 2006, 03:44:20 am by Singh »
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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
You cant end a psot like that! i demand more!
actualy, mabye not.
"When ink and pen in hands of men Inscribe your form, bipedal P They draw an altar on which God has slaughtered all stability, no eyes could ever soak in all the places you anoint, and yet to see you all at once we only need the point. Flirting with infinity, your geometric progeny that fit inside you oh so tight with triangles that feel so right."
3.141592653589793238462643383279502884197169399375105820974944 59230781640628620899862803482534211706...
"Your ever-constant homily says flaw is discipline, the patron saint of imperfection frees us from our sin. And if our transcendental lift shall find a final floor, then Man will know the death of God where wonder was before."

 

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
They entered the chamber wordlessly, Bosch at the helm. Within a minute, the door was closed, and the entire chamber began to move, much like before.

It caught Sargo and Venson off guard as it plunged downwards into the water, but both Gibson and Bosch had braced themselves by now.

As they began to move, Bosch sat down to one side, near the console. It was going to be a long trip, and he needed to conserve his energy. His stomach began to growl from hunger as he realized it had been a long time since he had eaten.

But there was little they could do about it. Bosch had placed all his eggs in this one basket, and unless they could find supplies on the station above, they were pretty much doomed to a rather painful death from starvation. Not even the Shivans would be able to help them – the trip here had taken many days, and by the time they returned back, they'd be nothing but frozen corpses.

As bleak as the situation looked, Bosch couldn't help but think of what good would come out of this. The station, the ring – it had to add up someway. But how? The answer plagued his mind. He could feel there was a connection here, some explanation – indeed, there was one, albiet on the installation that hovered at the center of this ring.

No matter....he would be patient. They would find their answers soon, if nothing else.

The trip went on in silence as Bosch watched the waters outside. Occasionally, some of that large fish would come and watch tehm throughout the trip – one even tried to attack them, bumping slightly against the capsule, but was driven away when the lasers increased their intensity.

Bosch couldn't explain it, but there was something about those fish that simply felt...odd. The way they behaved, and more importantly, the way their eyes looked at the men. It wasn't the look a normal predator would give to it's prey...Bosch could've sworn he was hallucinating when he saw it, but it just seemed that way, and it seemed to obvious to be anything else. When he looked in those eyes, they did not betray any sign of intelligence, or anything else...yet, at the same time, they betrayed one thing that was present only in a setient being: hatred.

Before Bosch could study it any further, however, the creature moved off, and vanished into the darkness, leaving behind a very perplexed and confused Admiral in it's wake.

****

Several minutes later, the group trepidly entered the control center. The bridge was still operational, but the others looked at it wearily, unsure if they could trust it or not. But still, they followed Bosch across the bridge, not saying a word about it.

When they approached the centre console, Bosch noticed something blinking on one of the side screens. It was far, far different than before. Moving towards it, he tried to translate the words, struggling with the dialect and langauge. But when he saw it, he simply shook his head.

“What is it?”

Gibson asked from behind him, keeping watch towards the entrance and bridge as the others kept an eye out towards the other directions. Standard perimeter. Next to where Gibson was standing, Bosch noticed the rather large bag that held the ETAK device.

“Someone switched on the security system, releasing the creatures we saw earlier...the question however, is who did it.”

Gibson didn't turn around as he replied.

“So you think we're not alone on the ring?”

Bosch simply shook his head as he studied the various symbols as they scrolled across the screen.

“Yes and no. Whomever it was had inside access to the ring's system. Meaning they were left behind. But whomever it is has to either be very, very determined to survive several thousand years or...”

“...is a ghost?” Venson asked from the side.

“Don't be ridiculous Venson. Their's no such thing as ghosts. We have no clue about the ancient's biology, for all we know, they could have incredibly long life spans.”

Bosch replied. But internally, he shuddered. The thought of a ghost didn't scare him much, really. He was too structured to believe in them himself. But still, someone with access to all the systems had managed to activate it, and attack them indirectly. Even if their weren't any real ghosts, could it possibly have been an AI? A ghost in the machine, so to speak.

Bosch didn't want to know. He pushed the thoughts aside. This development only increased the need to get out of here, now.

Checking to make sure they were all here, Bosch hesitated as he looked at the console and displays. He had absolutely no idea how this technology worked, or whether it was still in working order. But still, given the alternative was simply stay here and starve to death, it was their only option.

Raising his hands, he moved them across the screen, touching various symbols and moving them about. Bosch did this slowly, meticously, reading each symbol carefully so as to not mis-interpret it's meaning, lest kill them all during transport. To say it was easy would have been an utter lie as he fought to understand the meaning behind what was written, and the description of the various controls for the system. He recognized the basic controls, like mass, distance and possibly destination. Fortunately, the last two were already pre-programmed in, meaning they only needed to enter the other value.

But Bosch didn't know the exact mass value, and instead employed the built-in sensors to judge. After a few moments of scanning, Bosch felt a tingling sensation as suddenly, several gold rings formed around him and everyone else in the group, holding them in place as they encircled the bodies.

The world fazed completely as the control room disappeared around them. Only to leave blackness around them. He could hear a faint buzzing sound and some gargled voices in the background as they floated, suspended in mid-air for several seconds. He couldn't see a thing past the rings, nor could he breathe or even move. Yet, he did not feel the need to breathe. This was incredibly unnerving, and Bosch tried to say something or shout out – anything to try and remove the darkness around them, but it was little use as he couldn't even move his jaw.

The tingling sensation remaiend...and then, as suddenly as it had come, vanished. The gold rings then left off, releasing it's hold on them....only to drop into a large, grey and very dusty corridor. Bosch cried out as gravity took hold and he plummeted to the floor, dashing his wounded arm against the floor.

A flash of plain went through his mind, but then was immediately gone. Looking up, he saw the others were with them – and more importantly so was the ETAK device.

“What happened?” Sargo asked from Bosch's left side.

“The system kicked in automatically after scanning us.” Bosch replied, his tone calm and steady. Sitting up, he looked around.

The room they were in was completely square, barely taller than they were, forcing some of the taller members to hunch down a bit as they stood. They were standing on a small platform in the centre with barely enough room to hold all of them. To one side, Bosch noticed a set of doors.

Then, out of nowhere, a voice spoke, startling all of them. It was female, speaking with a soft, gentle tone that was somewhat comforting. But more importantly: it spoke in standard english.

“Species genomic and temporal scan complete; species identified as Human. Primary interface protocols adaptation complete.”

“What in the name of - “ Venson didn't have a chance to finish as the voice continued on, ignoring them.

“Temporal scan of current species-wide status underway, please wait. Scan complete , Current species governmental body is Galactic Terran-Vasudan Alliance, currently allied to Vasudans, recovering from recent Shivan containment effort. DNA match to GTVA database confirmed to Aken Bosch, Sean H. Gibson, Simmons H. Venson, Joseph Sargo. Equipment scans complete, quantum class J-type communications device detected, executing Objective S Protocol. A.I. Construct awakening sequence in progress, please wait.”

“Bosch, what's going on? I don't like the sound of this one bit.” Gibson said, helping Bosch up.

Bosch only shook his head. He really, really wished he had a clue as to what was going on, but the details of the situation was staggering, to say the least. Judging from what the voice had said, within ten seconds this gateway not only scanned them and adjusted it's interface and entire structure to suit their species, but had also scanned the status of their entire species and confirmed their identities against the GTVA's database.

Indeed, it was a question that even he asked as he thought What the hell is going on here? It was pretty clear that they were on the installation – no, make that the Gateway.

A wave of giddiness struck Bosch as he realized the full implications of the situation as it stood, as well as the technology involved.

Gibson caught him, his face having a somewhat concerned expression.

“Bosch? You allright?”

“Yes, I'm allright. I just realized...if this is a gateway, then that means the ancients -”

he never got a chance to finish the sentence as, suddenly, several sections of the wall changed. He couldn't describe it exactly -for it seemed that at one moment the walls around were simply plain, metallic, and then the next, several openings appeared, and at what looked like dozens upon dozens of turrets appeared from these opening, each one aiming at them.

“Oh crap!” Sargo shouted out from the side, as the entire group looked on at the guns pointed their way from all directions.

Now this was not what I expected Bosch thought to himself. But then, with the events that had happened earlier, he probably should have.
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Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
The first crossover bit to Halo.

Interlude[/i]

As we prepared to leave our heroes behind, I gazed not upon the road ahead, but the one we were leaving behind.

My creator's reign had extended far and wide, through many galaxies, over many civilizations. They had been the kind hand of help for a chosen few, the heavy hand of authority for some and a harsh instrument of death of many. It bothered my mind then, as it does now, the aggression, the atrocities they had committed.

In a sense, one could call it retribution, what the Universe had done to us, and I was reminded then of an addage that many a wise man had said: 'Do unto others, as you would do unto yourself.' If only this wise man had been in power, such devastation, such horrors, it all would have been avoided.

Yet, in a sense, it is a very tangled web that life weaves. Had it not been for such atrocities, such horrors, our sins would have never attracted the Great Destroyers, and my discovery of life granted by the kindness of one being would have been overshadowed by the discovery of death granted by the cruelty of my creators.

To this day...I wonder, why we were spared. We few, a handfull of the entire species. Were we blessed with good luck, or were we cursed with bad?It all seems so random. Even till today, upon studying the path that has brought me here, I cannot tell. At many a junction we were lucky, at many a junction, we weren't.

When I finally stopped gazing at the heroes, at the legacy we had left behind for the universe, I pondered upon where we were going, and what I was going to do. For the first time, fear crept into my mind; fear of the unknown that was beyond the gate. We had already been forsaken by one universe – what made us think we would be accepted by another? Perhaps it was desperation that made us so, for indeed, desperation and instinct have been the driving force of many a civilization, many an Exodus.

I thought then, as I do now....were we chosen for this journey? As the gateway died down and then opened up the floodgates between the universe, I remembered thinking about the circumstances and analyzing the data. Perhaps...fate had decided to spare us, for what few good deeds that our race committed, in balance for the sin that was our pride. Not everyone was proud, and indeed, many more lived humble and fulfilling lives, filled with kindness and understanding.

Then I realized, like I do now, that what the universe had done was merely seek Retribution for what we had done against it. But it was not cruel, not like we had been, for it had mercy. It would eventually forget us, and that we ever existed, for such was the way of life. But that did not mean it would remove our existance itself.

Perhaps...perhaps there were survivors. Other pockets, just like ours. But unlike us, they had nowhere else to go. I cannot imagine what such a situation would have been like; to despair as one slowly stagnated to death, waiting for either the Destroyers to come above their skies, or to wait for time and entropy to take its eventual course. I know that we were lucky, in every sense of the word. For unlike them, we would live...we would carry the memories of our empire as we went, and we would rebuild. While we were desperate, we did not despair. In such a situation...I do not see, do not comprehend how I would go about living, my very purpose for doing so having been removed by fate and destiny.

But such thoughts belonged in this universe, and this one alone, for at the time, I had much brighter and more important things that needed to be looked forward to.

As the gateway opened, I remember staring in awe at the tunnel that led us through the stars, and into the other world. It was  undescribable, and had I been of flesh and blood, I would have found it breathtaking in it's entirety. Then I asked the question...if the universe had shown us mercy...had it done the same to the creators of the gateway?

It had clearly not forgotten the creators, the ones that could traverse it at will, for their gateway had still been there. But had it removed them from existance, sparing them no mercy? And what of the great destroyers? Were they but the hands of destiny, the mere tools of fate? Or were they something far more sinister?

I remember asking those questions to myself, and to those that listened to me. Filled with nothing but questions and seeking answers, I dived head-first into the tunnel that would save us, the Great Destroyers at our heels and threatening to stop us.

Our journey had merely begun, that much was for certain, however. Unlike most journeys, however, ours was special...different, in a way.

For quiet simply, we were the exiles of one universe, forgotten by destiny and lost in time. Ours was the journey of the forgotten, and this was our story.

Once on the other side of the gate, we ran.

From system to system, galaxy to galaxy. We ran across the universe, getting as far away from the Destroyers as we possibly could. This universe was exactly the same as the one we had left, except it was younger. The paths we knew, the rivers we had bridged were all there, exactly as we remembered them, allowing us to run faster. This universe was prime...untouched and far younger than the one we had left. It was like it had been when our empire birthed itself from our planet, reaching out to the heavens as our children followed the embers of dying stars in the pursuit of their dreams, their destinys.

I do not know for how long we ran. Many generations of my creators came and left as we did so, non-stop. I know that when we stopped, we were in a galaxy where our empire had been strongest, near the same homeworld upon which we had arisen, and upon which our dreams had been shattered. But it was empty, devoid of any life and evidence of our species. It was as if we had never existed.

When we came upon it..I considered. We had been given a second chance, another shot at life and getting it right. Perhaps...perhaps this was the chance to set things right, to bring about good to the galaxy, and to life.

With much trepidation, and despite the protests of my creators, we established our presence here, setting base on the planet, and reaching out across the stars. The society we created would be one for peace, one to make up for the sins we had committed, and one that would help the species that we knew would begin to grow far, far in the future.

To the few species that we met, our technology, our legacy was considered reaching the height of presence and the pinnacle of achievement. We were the oldest they had encountered, and so they gave us our name for which we would be known throughout their realm.

For we were the forerunners, the ones that had come here from the depths of hell, looking for the path to salvation. Until we had stopped, I had never realized it...never found it. Until I had stopped and worked towards bettering ourselves, to make up for the sins we had committed, I never realized the truth. Only when I gazed upon it in our achievements, in the heights we had reached, I felt it within my heart then, that we had indeed achieved salvation.

Sadly, the truth would soon show me otherwise.
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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
He considered the creatures for a moment. Had they been gaurdians left behind by the Ancients? Or were they merely creatures that had evolved in this eco-system? In either case, they bore extre

Eh?  Did that paragraph get cut off?

 

Offline Singh

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Re: A Journey of the Forgotten
edited and fixed. Looks like a mistake on my part, apologies.
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(