[xenthorious]

This one isn't complete but I thought I should try something different. Here's several images, give me some feed back, improvements, sugestions, etc.

http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class01.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class02.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class03.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class04.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class05.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class06.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class07.jpg

[Taristin]

...what is it?  

It could become something cool with more definition, and less smoothshading... but as it is, I can't make anything out.

[Carl]

you might want to give it more shape. at this point it's pretty much just a cone.

[Nuke]

looks like a sex toy

[Primus]

Looks like a big missile to me... Or a small cruiser...
...What Carl said...

[c914]

without all smoothing could be civil liner

[Night Hammer]

Originally posted by Carl
you might want to give it more shape. at this point it's pretty much just a cone.

yeah...:thepimp:

[xenthorious]

LOL Nuke...

Fair enough...  Before I alter model, look at it with textures and backgrounds and tell me what you think then...

http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class08.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class09.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class10.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class11.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class12.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class13.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class14.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class15.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class16.jpg
http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class17.jpg

I'm not great with textures, but asuming this object was going to get a texture overhaul by someone more experienced; this would be the basic subsystems.

http://talimoor.game-host.org/cap_ship_NewYork_class18.jpg

Again more feedback plz.

[Primus]

It does look better with textures.. But it's too smooth...

[Taristin]

Not enough detail.

[Knight Templar]

I think it's stupid because you said "turrents".

That is all.

[aldo_14]

I think it is somewhat plain, yep.  You either need to alter the shape somewhat, or add detailing to the hull, I think.  At the moment it's very plain.

[xenthorious]

Okay, thanks for feedback.  Will work more on it's design.

[Goober5000]

*smacks xenthorious*

[strong bad]
If you want it to be possessive it's just I-T-S, but if it's supposed to be a contraction then it's I-T-apostrophe-S.  Scalawag.
[/strong bad]

[aldo_14]

Gramar Inquiziton indedd............

u con edite peeples poists to corect there gramarr noo onyways, cant u?

[Goober5000]

Yes.  But I prefer it when people learn it themselves.  The whole "give a man a fish" philosophy.

[aldo_14]

u doo' doo u?

[Martinus]

Originally posted by Goober5000
Yes.  But I prefer it when people learn it themselves.  The whole "give a man a fish" philosophy.

[color=66ff00]And ask him to cut down the largest tree in the forest with it?


BTW good work xenthorious, is this exactly what you want or is it just what you settled for given your abilities? If it's exactly what you want then I'd do some serious texture detailing, if it's your abilities then keep practicing.

The mesh looks pretty good as far as build goes, no intersecting objects and the like.
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[SadisticSid]

It looks like a candle that somehow found its way into space.

[Nuke]

i remember my early models
*pukes*
thats better