having waited some time to download this mission, i must admit i was kind of dissappointed.
For a start, patrolling around babylon 5 loses its appeal after a while. It would have been much better to have had all those isn briefings and stuff before the mission started, in the campaign briefing section. Some people may not read it, but fans will, and they will enjoy it too. I know i would.
And about the isn things - they were completely out of place and out of order. For a start most of the messages are supposed to have been delivered days before the battle. To have them all at once destroyed the immersion.
In addition, you could have done a bit more research. Babylon 5's layout in regards to the jumpgate is completely different. For a start, it goes the other way from the planet, so in the mission it is backwards. More importantly, the jumpgate is almost side on from the station, a bit in front but mostly sideways.
i am making a severed dreams map that i think will do the episode more justice.
that said, it is a fine piece of work. It just isn't right, that's all.