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Okay, first of all, using MS Word's grammar checker is a bad, bad, BAD idea.  Grab yourself a copy of Hodge's Harbrace Handbook and learn the language yourself, instead of using Word as a crutch.  You'll find that Microsoft has a thing or fifty to learn about writing.  I don't care if they've gotten better since the last time I used the grammar checker, since there wasn't much of a way for them to have gotten worse.

Now to the point I was going to bring up, before seeing that travesty of copy-paste-F7 behavior...

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You do know that you write your posts and mission dialogue in a different way...

Speak for yourself.  About the only differences in style between my posts and my mission text is that mission text is writen in character, and on rare occasion, I'll toss a smiley into a post.  If I couldn't pass something written off as at least a rough draft to an English professor, I don't consider it readable.  I hold others to a similar standard, as I'll skip over even potentially interesting threads, when the poster is incapable of demonstrating the slightest understanding of the language.

  

Offline Janos

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hay guyz i think adama is better than akbar confirm/deny
lol wtf

 

Offline CP5670

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32 years after the Big War, we again let not us know almost nothing of the Shivans.  

Physically, the Shivans has the multiple, the eyes calm and five legs with the manipulative ones of claw as.  His insecte-comme coquille does not appear the original one the one to the physionomie of the creature, suggesting that the Shivans be a cybernetic merger of biology and the technology.  The integrated weapon of the plasma exposes also the property of an artificial organic merger.  The weapon can be a class to converge the device drives by the energy of the himself is, well that this point is the subject of heated controversy.  

These details is quoted as the proofs that the Shivans could not have evolved as the Terran or the type of Vasudan that they had, but that was probable constructs by another company.  Only a handful of Shivans never was captured, and every investigation in the spécimens live you finished with the rebellion of GTI Hells in 2335.  The results of these studies remain extremely classified.  

Well that the Shivans is evidently xenocidal, their motives and the origins has but to be determined you.  According to the Old devices, the Shivans seems to possess some class of the sensitiveness to the disturbances of under spaces.  We do not know if the Shivans returned itself to this corner of the galaxy by the coincidence, by the cycle or the indication, or by his discovery of the trip of under spaces terran-vasudan.  
Xenobiologists knows very small of the company of Shivan.  A front hypothesis is the theory of the spirit of the ruche, discussing this company of Shivan is broken in the specialized functions controlled by a collective intelligence.  The proof the more convincing now this theory is driven it forces of Shivan than continues the destruction of the Lucifer, the decisive point of the Big War.  The other experts notify against to attribute the property of insectoid al Shivans, in spite of their appearance and the conduit.  The communication of Shivan seems to arrive in the electromagnetic range, well that the efforts to decode their transmissions did not produce the significant results to date.  

Take it apart. :D

 

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actualy, mabye not.
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Offline Boomer

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MS Word's grammar checker


:lol:  I know, I was just using the format because that's what I knew.  The actual spell\grammar checking came from me. :lol:

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Spelling is a part in a larger whole called grammar.


I counter your metaphor with an analogy!
"As spelling is to a word, grammar is to a sentence."


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Physically, the Shivans has the multiple, the eyes calm and five legs with the manipulative ones of claw as. His insecte-comme coquille does not appear the original one the one to the physionomie of the creature, suggesting that the Shivans be a cybernetic merger of biology and the technology. The integrated weapon of the plasma exposes also the property of an artificial organic merger. The weapon can be a class to converge the device drives by the energy of the himself is, well that this point is the subject of heated controversy.

These details is quoted as the proofs that the Shivans could not have evolved as the Terran or the type of Vasudan that they had, but that was probable constructs by another company. Only a handful of Shivans never was captured, and every investigation in the spécimens live you finished with the rebellion of GTI Hells in 2335. The results of these studies remain extremely classified.

Well that the Shivans is evidently xenocidal, their motives and the origins has but to be determined you. According to the Old devices, the Shivans seems to possess some class of the sensitiveness to the disturbances of under spaces. We do not know if the Shivans returned itself to this corner of the galaxy by the coincidence, by the cycle or the indication, or by his discovery of the trip of under spaces terran-vasudan.
Xenobiologists knows very small of the company of Shivan. A front hypothesis is the theory of the spirit of the ruche, discussing this company of Shivan is broken in the specialized functions controlled by a collective intelligence. The proof the more convincing now this theory is driven it forces of Shivan than continues the destruction of the Lucifer, the decisive point of the Big War. The other experts notify against to attribute the property of insectoid al Shivans, in spite of their appearance and the conduit. The communication of Shivan seems to arrive in the electromagnetic range, well that the efforts to decode their transmissions did not produce the significant results to date.


So that's what Bosch was saying to the Shivans at first contact....;)
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well this thread no longer serves a purpose.
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