I agree with Swantz (and / or you); either the guitars need a volume drop, or the rest needs to be louder.  Preferably the rest louder, unless you're neer 60-70% volume already...  The average volume on the track should be 60-70, 
I think.  Also, when the male voices come in before that, there's instruments playing.  I do believe it would sound better if either the voices or the instruments were made background (I'd prefer instruments background, voices front)... either that, or rearranged a bit somehow, as they seem to not do so well when they are the same volume.
All in all, great work... do I detect a bit of Descent - style there?  

  As well as FreeSpace in the first part.  
