[Thorn]

Relicpr0n is having a contest for best screenshot/render etc.
This is what I came up with, I just want to know what could be improved, removed, added.
Its a scene from one of the missions in Cataclysm, you come looking for the Bentusi's help, but theyre all leaving through a massive slipgate to escape the Beast, you have to move the Command Ship in to block the gate and destroy the nodes around the gate. The Bentusi dont like that, so they proceed to kikc your @$$.
 

[This message has been edited by Thorn (edited 12-03-2001).]

[Fineus]

Looks good so far - more stuff though? looks kinda plain as it is...

[This message has been edited by Thunder (edited 12-03-2001).]

[Ryx]

Yes, more fighters and stuff in there.
I know i put everything i had in front of the slipgate, so more of everything.

Still it does look good

[Eishtmo]

I take it those little blobs in a circle is the slip gate.  Hard to tell from here.

Anyways, perhaps you should try a different angle, more under and just to the right of gate facing toward where the camera is now.  Then add more of everything, opening up with all their weapons.  Make it clear that the Bentusi want to go through that gate and the player's forces aren't about to let that happen.  More ships, more weapons, more explosions.  Many more explosions.

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[Setekh]

Maybe give it a caption or a short bit of text to explain it? For people who don't get to see your explanation.