thing is, im cutting it very thin as it is....

(thinner than paper)
Edit: at least my "campaign" i'm making is doing good, finally figured out mostly how the first mission's gonna work out: Big shivan incursion a week before campaign starts, i haven't chose which system so send ideas! The last line of defence in that system has been established at a jump node to another allied system. The defence consist of: A
MODIFIED deimos class corvette. thats it, save the two wings of fighters you lead in. the shivans are trying to dogpile two liliths, a rakshasa and a bunch of fighters onto the deimos, the GTCv Serene. about a minute into the mission a vasudan cruiser (aten class) will jump in and try and help. It is supposed to either get in the Serene's way, or draw the shivans fire for a minute beacause it warps in right inbetween the serene and the cruisers. The Serene's captain yells at the vasudans to bug out VIA either the jump node or just plain warp out. At best the blast from the cruiser blowing up wont hurt the Serene. I'm kinda stuck on what should happen for the next two minutes, but once shivan forces are destroyed at the end you and the Serene will get a bit of respite. then it ends with a Argo and a Orion jumping in to hold down the fort, with the Argo going in to repair the Serene.
Any feedback on that would be good, also do you think i should add a small convoy of fleeing ships in? Right now its kinda easy because the Serene's Vasudan slash beam cannons rip throught the shivan cruisers while its turrets (armed with both standard and long range flak, morning stars and Prometheus S's) tear apart the fighters. the only things i got done is put in the ships up to the part were the Aten gets destroyed. only event is the beam free stuff.
Edit: oh, i almost forgot, at the start of the mission you're right underneath the Rakshasa, and it's AAA rips apart a couple of your wingman before they get it together.... I'm kinda gonna leave out the Rakshasa from the briefing, so you really are clueless the first time you play and WHAM.... its cool yet depressing to watch 3 of your wingmen get blow apart as then race past you to join the battle.....