Weeelll...according to FSRefBible, the scene at Tombaugh Station shows the Shivans jumping out of the Lucifer without suits. Given that, I don't think there's a need to attempt showing how a Shivan corridor looks like. Still, the idea of seeing a fan-made render of a Shivan corridor sounds interesting...but I don't think it's really needed in this particular cutscene.
Here's the relevant section I clipped from the Reference Bible.
AP 2/26: This next one is cut totally The events there are discussed in a Command Brief screen, however.
Act 2 Intro A
This scene shows the capture and eventual destruction of the Taranis cruiser. It also shows the SuperDestroyer in its entirety for the first time.
[cut to anchor doing live news coverage]
Anchor: We’re now going to the science station Tombaugh in the Ribos system where a team of Terran and Vasudan scientists await the arrival of a recently captured Shivan D-class Cruiser. It’s being escorted by the Terran Destroyer XXXX, which conducted the attacks and capture operations over the course of three days.
[cut to Cruiser & Destroyer arriving through subspace holes, viewed from a large window on the science station. The newscast can be dimly heard in the background.]
Terran-1: [approaching window and pointing] Whoa! There she is!
Terran-2: [joining first Terran at the window] Look at that!
[two others join them at the window]
[cut to close shot of the two big ships leaving subspace, with many fighters flying escort. Some battle damage is seen on the Taranis]
[cut to reverse shot of ships approaching station]
[cut to shot over the shoulders of the Terrans clustered around the window. They’re cheering and acting very excited]
[cut to shot of nearby comm officer]
Comm Officer: Roger, this is Tombaugh station, XXXX, we have you. You’re now cleared for approach at pylon S1…. stand by for ADT transmission.
The comm officer’s station begins to flicker. Power is failing, and the instruments are struggling to retain their displays.
[cut to window shot again. Terrans are looking around at the failing lighting systems, making puzzled noises. Comm officer can be heard nearby, trying in vain to regain contact with the approaching ships]
[cut to exterior shot showing both Destroyer XXXX and the science station. Lights can be seen failing across both, leaving them black.]
[cut to another view showing some escort fighters losing power and starting to list aimlessly]
[cut to comm officer shot again. She’s working in darkness, trying to raise the XXXX on her comm]
Over her shoulder we see a huge warp tunnel begin to appear. It’s blood red and much larger than any subspace hole’s seen so far. The crew gasps in shock, wondering what it is.
[cut to closeup of emerging SuperDestroyer. Show tons of fighters spew from it’s bays before it’s even emerged totally. The SD mows over a couple Terran fighters floating in its way.]
[cut to shots of Shivan fighters blasting the helpless Terran fighters, pilots yelling]
[cut to shot of SD passing by the captured Cruiser. Watch as the shadow passes over the side of the station]
[cut to forward shot of the crowd at the window, as the shadow passes over them, they stand there in awe]
[cut to shot over their shoulders, as the SD passes very close to the Cruiser and station. Members of the assault team on the Cruiser point at different parts of it, muttering. The SD gradually slows to a stop.]
[cut to under shot of the SD’s big gun array. It starts to reconfigure and “draw light” to itself.]
[cut to shot of one crewmember]
Crew-1: Oh, no! [like he/she is the first to realize what’s happening]
[cut back to gun]
A huge energy beam blasts out from the gun!
[cut to shot of beam tearing into the Cruiser as it gets thrown back from the blast]
[cut to shot of assault troops at window, being thrown against the window from the impact]
[cut to shot of beam making its way across the Cruiser, slicing it up]
maybe: [cut to angle showing Shivans leaping from openings in the SD (without suits!)]
[cut to interior of cruiser where the crew was]
Through the window we can see the beam approach this room. The crew is running around madly, but the wall erupts and they’re all incinerated in a split second. Come up with some cool incineration effect here.
[cut to medium shot of the two ships]
The beam is cutting through the far side of the Cruiser, and it’s hull is buckling and breaking up.
[cut to interior shot of Shivans boarding and tearing up some Terran crew]
[cut to shot of a floating Terran fighter]
The battle is reflected in his canopy. He’s watching helplessly in wide-eyed fear]
[cut to reverse shot, showing his POV]
A couple seconds of battle can be seen before a Shivan fighter spots him, aims, and blasts him to hell. The screen goes black.
...that's a nice black box we've got here...
