To answer your question in the describtion of the open video: Yes this video comes very close to the opening sequences of Anime series. At least it is quite close in style to the Gundam SEED and Gundam SEED Destiny (don't know any other Gundam except "wing", which I saw on TV once and I'm qutie glad I forgot most of it by now) openers - not so much with serious stuff like Elfenlied though, but then it isn't supposed to go there anyway. Certainly better than the good old Saber Rider opener
allthough that has "classic" bonus going for it.
And I think you should put a link to this thread or a homepage in the YouTube video describtions, in case someone stubles over those and likes to learn more.
So.... do you have any backstory for your universe finished? I love backstory and would really like to take a peek into it. Who are the characters, who do they fight, why do they fight them (an especially important point for me), what other factions are there besides the "good guys" and the enemy, ect....