I just don't find anything remotely decent about a semi-serious fan fiction involving a Vindicare Assassin falling in love with the Farseer he's been assigned to terminate.
Poorly thought pof, altough the writing style is decent. But really. Love there feels like a sniper bullet.
Didn't even have read the whole thing to see that it had a SERIOUS problem with the pacing.
Love should grow with time... in this case a LONG time. Going from hatered to mistrust, to respect, to trust, to friendship, and finally to love.
Who knew that was even possible? Vindicare training is supposed to be unbreakable
There's no such thing as impossible or unbreakable. Any system that has humans involved in it is by definition not foolproof.
Still it would have been far more believable if it was a Imperial Guard - heck, even a Space Marine.