Thanks for the feedback. Yes, still a WIP but I wanted to have some people test it who weren't involved in the design of the mission to see how it plays out from a fresh perspective.
Good note about the weapon restrictions, I'll have to remove the heavier weapons like the nuke bombs, thanks. That said, the missiles I provided already equipped are usually enough to do the job with a single volley of 2 missiles. Maybe that's something else I need to look at.
Yes, you are Red 1 as your Raptor designation. I took a leap in the debrief with calling you Three because of
being a Cylon
but perhaps that needs to be made clearer, or taken out.
You're right about the debrief text - I have only added text for one mission outcome at this stage but more will be incoming.
I'll see what I can do about extending the length. My main focus was to get the main mechanics down and get some feedback on it, which has been helpful to get.
Thanks again