Thanks for the post draft, Kagetsuki.
- Maybe include the SCP's website's URL http://scp.indiegames.us/
- Actually, we don't accept contributions.
The HLP website has a donation page for maintaining the forums etc., but my understanding is that HLP is okay money-wise for the time being.
- You might change the wording to say that HLP/SCP has created "completely original missions, content packs, mods, and entire games (total conversions) running on FSO, such as The Babylon Project http://babylon.hard-light.net/
and Diaspora http://diaspora.hard-light.net/
- Maybe change "FreeSpace is a massive space combat simulator" to "FreeSpace 2 is a classic space fighter combat game that is famous for its massive capital ships"
- As mentioned, FSO is not open source by the standards of the Open Source Initiative, although the source code is available.