Looks like a promising start to me. Hard facts and none of that fan-boi extrapolation
Dave's House o' Fighters
* GTF Myrmidon space superiority fighter (7)You might want a footnote that this was mentioned in the manual and it's an easter-egg.
Kresco Engineering is another corporation, it's the contractor for the Herc2 and the Perseus in the FS2 demo.
Also in your notes Bosch is spelled wrong.
For reference it's:
VPE and PVN
Vasudan Parliamentary Empire
Parliamentary Vasudan Navy
Always in FS the abbreviation for the Terran-Vasudan war is the:
V-T war
Also Hatshepsut is spelled wrong in the ship reference.
On a random fact:
ETAK is based on modulated quantum pulses. (this is from the command briefing for the mission Return to Babel)
On another random fact, one of the Silent Threat multiplayer missions deals with a device known as the Serkr torpedo. You might want to include that into the story as it does coincide with the ST plot.
Also be sure to include plot notes from the FS2 multiplayer campaign Operation Templar.