icefire, that's partially correct. I also sometimes pick random newbies for small parts (i.e. parts that would be given to extras).
Anyway, sorry for the incredible wait. I had what I believe to be a mini-mental breakdown, depression, etc. (altho I wouldn't know, I didn't see a shrink.) I sort of treated it myself, however, so time will tell
Anyway, here's the next part (tiny, please bear with):
INT. Shrike's Hideout. Day.
We open to a front view of two hands holding a piece of paper. It stays like that for a few seconds, until the hands lower, revealing SHRIKE.Shrike: ****...
We cut to a bigger view of the room. The boarders are still cleaning up after the firefight, however, most everything is back in it's usual place. WINDRUNNER turns around in his chair to look at SHRIKE.Windrunner: Bad news, sir?
Shrike: The Relic forums (he sighs) arn't going to send us help. We have to send them proof that this isn't some sort of big joke.
We hear a loud bang, as GORTEF throws down a metallic chunk of debris on the floor.Gortef: Proof?! They ****ing want
proof?! If I were there, I'd ****ing show them some damn proof!
Shrike: And that is exaclty what you're going to do, Gortef.
Gortef: Huh?
Shrike: We are going to hand
deliver to them the proof they want.
Heads perk up at this news. Board members turn from their work to see what's going on. FLASER is the first to speak up again.Flaser: What do you mean?
Shrike: We are going to
steal a fighter, and
fly it to the Relic boards. From there, we will give them the evidence we need.
Gortef: And how do you expect to do that?
We cut to a wireframe view of the whole HLP station. A semi-Mission: Impossible tune is playing in the background. We zoom into the station. First we travel to the HLP control room. SHRIKE is doing voice-over.Shrike: First, we'll knock out communications. Dark, that's you.
We rotate around and zoom to an access shaft leading towards the hangar. We go inside it and begin moving forward through it.Shrike: After that, Gortef, Flaser, and myself will move through the main ventilation shaft leading towards the hangar. We'll drop down in (
we come to the end of the shaft, and cut to an image of the hangar. We see two figures drop out, and run towards two fighters sitting in the hangar.) and steal two fighters. Gortef, you get one, Flaser, you get the other (
the two figures hop in and take off.). I'll provide cover.
Dark_4ce: Shrike, won't they notice if I knock out their communications?
SHRIKE turns towards him, and nods understandingly.Shrike: I only want you to shut down communications to and from the hangar, and only for 10 minutes. If we're not out of there by then, we're not getting out at all.
A solemn silence falls temporarily over the group. Gortef: (Slaps hands together) Well! Sounds like a plan!
We fade to:
