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Offline Setekh

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Heh, first time I've read this - pretty funny stuff, me likes. :D How up-to-date is that zip in your sig, UT? ;)
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Offline Darkage

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Heh, first time I've read this - pretty funny stuff, me likes. :D How up-to-date is that zip in your sig, UT? ;)



It's the first part of the story:)
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Offline icespeed

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ive let too much time pass before visiting this again... good stuff, as always, please post more or someone might get impatient and brain you or something...
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Offline TrashMan

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Hey Turnsky, you remember the pic you made of Tiara fighting Shrike? Well, I allways tought you are a great artist, but Tiara just looked lame on that pic.
So I was doing a little sketching during one boring class and:


EDIT: This should be in the Hard Ligh Art Forum...darn..
Oh well, Ill post a new one
« Last Edit: November 28, 2003, 06:20:29 pm by 624 »
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Offline Turnsky

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mine sucked... let's leave it at that..
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Offline Setekh

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It's the first part of the story:)


Aha... thanks, Daan :D *downloads*
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Offline wEvil

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perhaps there's a reason she looked lame in that pic?

:p  had to be said, heehee

 

Offline Agent

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Nice! Very interesting reading. Any part for me in this? I see that most people here are allready taking part in your story.

 

Offline icespeed

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agent, do or be something really really _really_ unique and maybe you'll get a part.

to be honest, that's a bit hard around here.
$quot;Let your light shine before men...$quot;
Matthew 5:16

When I graduate, I'm going to be a doctor, and people are going to come to me looking for treatment and prescription drugs, and I'm going to give it to them. Is anyone scared yet?

$quot;If you confess with your mouth, 'Jesus is Lord', and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.$quot; Romans 10:9

 

Offline Unknown Target

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icefire, that's partially correct. I also sometimes pick random newbies for small parts (i.e. parts that would be given to extras).


Anyway, sorry for the incredible wait. I had what I believe to be a mini-mental breakdown, depression, etc. (altho I wouldn't know, I didn't see a shrink.) I sort of treated it myself, however, so time will tell :)

Anyway, here's the next part (tiny, please bear with):

INT. Shrike's Hideout. Day.
We open to a front view of two hands holding a piece of paper. It stays like that for a few seconds, until the hands lower, revealing SHRIKE.

Shrike: ****...

We cut to a bigger view of the room. The boarders are still cleaning up after the firefight, however, most everything is back in it's usual place. WINDRUNNER turns around in his chair to look at SHRIKE.

Windrunner: Bad news, sir?

Shrike: The Relic forums (he sighs) arn't going to send us help. We have to send them proof that this isn't some sort of big joke.

We hear a loud bang, as GORTEF throws down a metallic chunk of debris on the floor.
Gortef: Proof?! They ****ing want proof?! If I were there, I'd ****ing show them some damn proof!

Shrike: And that is exaclty what you're going to do, Gortef.

Gortef: Huh?

Shrike: We are going to hand deliver to them the proof they want.

Heads perk up at this news. Board members turn from their work to see what's going on. FLASER is the first to speak up again.

Flaser: What do you mean?

Shrike: We are going to steal a fighter, and fly it to the Relic boards. From there, we will give them the evidence we need.

Gortef: And how do you expect to do that?

We cut to a wireframe view of the whole HLP station. A semi-Mission: Impossible tune is playing in the background. We zoom into the station. First we travel to the HLP control room. SHRIKE is doing voice-over.

Shrike: First, we'll knock out communications. Dark, that's you.

We rotate around and zoom to an access shaft leading towards the hangar. We go inside it and begin moving forward through it.

Shrike: After that, Gortef, Flaser, and myself will move through the main ventilation shaft leading towards the hangar. We'll drop down in (we come to the end of the shaft, and cut to an image of the hangar. We see two figures drop out, and run towards two fighters sitting in the hangar.) and steal two fighters. Gortef, you get one, Flaser, you get the other (the two figures hop in and take off.). I'll provide cover.

Dark_4ce: Shrike, won't they notice if I knock out their communications?

SHRIKE turns towards him, and nods understandingly.

Shrike: I only want you to shut down communications to and from the hangar, and only for 10 minutes. If we're not out of there by then, we're not getting out at all.

A solemn silence falls temporarily over the group.

Gortef: (Slaps hands together) Well! Sounds like a plan!

We fade to:
« Last Edit: December 04, 2003, 08:08:24 pm by 368 »

 

Offline Unknown Target

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READ THE ABOVE! :D

 
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Offline Turnsky

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yesssss.....morrreee....
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Offline neo_hermes

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Moreeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
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Habeeb it...

 

Offline Dark_4ce

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Good stuff as always dude! Keep it up! :yes: Just don't burn yourself out. :D
I have returned... Again...

 

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Originally posted by Corhellion
(Lestat voice)...MORE!...(/Lestat voice)


Who's Lestat?
Petrach and a few other escaped in a pod but were covered in watermelon juice....it was horrible :eek2: :shaking: -dan87uk

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Offline Turnsky

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Who's Lestat?


:blah:
The Foxfire Chronicles[/b]

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do not torment the sleep deprived artist, he may be vicious when cornered,
in case of emergency, administer caffeine to the artist,
he will become docile after that,
and less likely to stab you in the eye with a mechanical pencil
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Offline Stryke 9

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It's French for "The Stat", "stat" being shorthand for "statistic". I believe the statistic has to do with annual corn yields in Linn County, Iowa.

Either that or it's a corruption of "Les Tats", which would be a French porn movie, most likely. Or just an indie film about some magic breasts. Which would be the coolest movie ever.
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Lestat - A Vampire as I recall
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