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Offline redsniper

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I haven't played either actually. The only strategy games I really like are X-Com, Homeworld, and Starcraft, and I cheated through most of Starcraft because I wanted to see the rest of the story. :p
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TA > Starcraft in gameplay.

Starcraft > TA in story.

But how many people play an RTS to listen to a story? ;)
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

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Sorry guys, no action - didn't have enough time (homework). But I wanted to post this so I don't leave you with nothing :)

SCENE ONE HUNDRED FOURTEEN. INT. GRANDEUR BRIDGE – DAY.

SWANTZ is sitting in front of a large holographic sphere, filled with hundreds of small red and green dots. Suddenly, the red dots begin to disappear at a rapid rate – he wheels around to face LIGHTSPEED.

SWANTZ: Sir! The enemy is jumping out now!

LIGHTSPEED nods and whips around to face his HELM OFFICER.

LIGHTSPEED: Get us over there now!

He turns to the center display, sitting back in his chair and typing a few commands into his keypad. The display in front of him flashes, and diverges into two separate maps; one of his forces, and one of the ones they are going to rescue.

LIGHTSPEED: Inform all ships in the fleet that we are jumping in ten seconds – all hands, brace for subspace jump!

We cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED FIFTEEN. INT. NEO TERRA VICTORIOUS CONTROL CENTER – DAY.

MONGOOSE is sitting in front of his own display. He grabs his headset with his hand and nods, turning around to SHRIKE behind him.

MONGOOSE: Sir – the Grandeur and its fleet confirms that it has jumped to the rendezvous point – the Atlantis is warming up her drives now and will arrive momentarily.

SHRIKE nods, and turns to KALFIRETH.

SHRIKE: Well…all we can do now is wait, I guess…

KALFIRETH starts to nod, but suddenly stops, listening.

KALFIRETH: Do you hear that…?

SHRIKE turns to listen.

SHRIKE: No, I –

He stops, as a loud, rythmatic banging and chanting suddenly starts to echo down the corridors, growing louder and louder. The sound sends vibrations through the metal walls, and it is amplified a thousand fold. SHRIKE darts to MONGOOSE.
SHRIKE: Mongoose – what is that? Pull up the security cameras for General Freespace and all passageways leading from it.

MONGOOSE nods and hits a few keystrokes. The screen comes alive as several different views from different security cameras pop up on different areas. On each image is a swarming, teeming mass of thousands upon thousands of forum members, all with zombified looks on their faces. SHRIKE leans forward, squinting.

SHRIKE: What are they saying…?

MONGOOSE hits a few more keys, and the sounds from outside are soon echoed on his speakers. He adjusts some settings on the screen, and the hundreds of thousands of voices suddenly coalesce into one, rythmatic beat.

Voices: Freespace 3! Beams won’t fire! Freespace 3! Beams won’t fire…!

SHRIKE takes a step back and motions for his two compatriots to join him. They approach and view the screen with varying degrees of shock. NICO is the first to speak.

NICO: My God…the noobs…they’re uprising!

SHRIKE nods and grips MONGOOSE tightly by the shoulder.

SHRIKE: Hurry, bring up all the cameras in the passageways leading to this forum…!

MONGOOSE taps hurriedly, feverishly bringing up four large images on the screen – the same scene greets them – hundreds of thousands of zombie-like forum members, scrambling over one another, vainly trying to surge forward.

SHRIKE takes a step back then hurridly grabs his tactical vest from the center chair.

SHRIKE: Nico, come with me! Kalifreth, stay here and work with Mongoose – try to keep them out by whatever means necessary!

They comply, and NICO trails after SHRIKE. They enter the corridor outside, and begin to run as fast as they can down the windy hallways and byways of the Command Center.

NICO: Where are we heading?

SHRIKE: We’ve got to get whatever we have left in here mobilized and ready to fight. How many forum members do we have left in this forum?

NICO pauses, thinking.

NICO: About one hundred soldiers and maybe twenty or thirty mechs – that’s nowhere near enough!
SHRIKE nods, then reaches down into his tac vest pocket and pulls out a walkie-talkie. He depresses the button, flicking it on.

SHRIKE: Kalifreth, can you get the Forum Defense Grid online?

KALIFRETH: Two seconds…

There’s a long pause on the radio – SHRIKE and NICO take a sharp turn and are greeted with an elevator stop. The doors are missing, and there are no cables hanging in the dark abyss beyond. They look to the left and find a staircase doorway. Kicking it in, the door blasts off its rusty hinges and the two sprint down the staircase at top speed.

SHRIKE: Kalifreth, tell me you’re taking a long time for a good reason…!

KALIFRETH: The grid isn’t coming online! Someone must’ve disabled it!

SHRIKE turns to NICO, who looks at him with an equal look of surpise. SHRIKE turns back to the walkie-talkie.

SHRIKE: Alright, has the Atlantis jumped already?

KALIFRETH: Negative, they are still completing pre-jump checklists.

SHRIKE: Get them to send one – no, two contingents of marines and three contingents of mechs to this location, pronto!

KALIFRETH: Problem – if we do that, they won’t be able to get in! The noobs control half the station!

SHRIKE and NICO have by now reached the bottom of the stairwell – NICO rams his upper body into it, breaking it open. They are greeted with an even louder banging and chanting coming from the walls beyond, and hurriedly rush to the small force of troops in the center of the forum.

SHRIKE: I don’t care! Tell them to blast through the outer hull if they have to! Just get them here – and once you’re done with that, get your asses down here and armed, now!

KALFIRETH: Acknowledged – Kalifreth out.

SHRIKE lowers the walkie-talkie and dashes to the soldiers, waving his arms frantically – they skid to a halt in front of RICTOR.

RICTOR: What’s going on?

NICO steps forward to take charge of the situation.

NICO: We have a situation – we need all your men on all four entrances to this forum –get them armed and ready for a massive enemy encounter.

RICTOR nods and turns around, shouting orders left and right. NICO and SHRIKE turn to each other and shake hands, then split off, each joining their own squad. We fade to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED SIXTEEN. INT. ATLANTIS BRIDGE – DAY.

SANDWICH is sitting in the captain’s chair, over viewing a large holographic checklist right in front of him – suddenly, one of his officers wheels around.

OFFICER: Sir! Urgent message from Shrike! They say they need reinforcements!

SANDWICH turns in surpise.

SANDWICH: Did they say what they needed and why?

OFFICER: (Nods) Yes sir! There is an enormous noob uprising in progress – they need two marine contingents and three mech contingents – he states that you will probably have to cut through the outer hull to reach them.

SANDWICH: (Grumbles) Gosh darnit Shrike – it better be one huge uprising, or I’ll…

SANDWICH turns to the OFFICER.

SANDWICH: Alright, send them – we’ll have to do without them for now.

The OFFICER nods, and turns back to his console. We cut to:
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And the tension mounts.:D
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Offline Corsair

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Why can't the Marines just land with guns blazing and take on the n00bs from one side while Rictor, Shrike, & Co. get them from the other?

Can't wait for it all to start :D
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Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

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Again with Sandwich swearing?  Tsk, tsk. :p

 

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Woohoo, I'm a tech lackey! :D  

(That noob line had to be the funniest moment of the whole story :lol: )

 

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Quote
Originally posted by Goober5000
Again with Sandwich swearing?  Tsk, tsk. :p


:lol:

BTW, guys, don't get any ideas. I'd just as soon mass-ban everyone then worry about dealing with an uprising in a less all-encompassing way. :D
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

Offline Singh

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huh....Sandwich's been in the army....if he didn't swear, at least once, I'd be really, really surprised :p

Another great job, UT :yes: :D
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You can thank Nightwish and 104.3 (The Buzz) for this installment.

People, people, reply in the thread! I need more names for the red shirts! :D

How is the writing on this one, by the way? It's been forever since I've done action writing.

SCENE ONE HUNDRED SEVENTEEN. EXT. FRIENDLY FLEET – DAY.

We open to see the other half of the fleet, still floating listlessly in space. A massive ship, the BABYLON, sits imposingly in the center of the fleet. Fighters zip back and forth between capital ships, rolling and dodging underneath the various girders and oddly shaped hulls. A small squadron strays a little too far from the fleet, and just as it turns around to return to it’s assigned post, a massive subspace portal opens, and the GRANDEUR rockets out in front of the small crafts, sending them reeling. Several more portals open up throughout the fleet, and LIGHTSPEED’s tiny fleet emerges from the netherworlds of subspace, intermingling with the hulking ships of the Hard Light Fleet. We cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN. INT. BABYLON BRIDGE – DAY.

MAEGLAMOR sits in his command chair, when suddenly red blips turn up all across the gigantic holographic board hovering in front of the bridge. He stands up in shock.

MAEGLAMOR: What the hell?

He wheels to face BLACKDOVE, who is tapping away furiously at the console in front of him.

MAEGLAMOR: Sensors, report!

BLACKDOVE turns around, and in a Scottish accent,relates his findings.

BLACKDOVE: Cap’n! I dunno whet they are! They just popped outta subspace!

MAEGLAMOR: Hail them!

He turns and faces the screen, the agitation mounting on his face. BLACKDOVE turns back to his keyboard, and taps away. Still looking down, he shouts to MAEGLAMOR.

BLACKDOVE: I cannot dew it cap’n!

MAEGLAMOR turns in surprise.

MAEGLMAOR: Why the hell not?

BLACKDOVE hits a few keys and turns to point in front of the holographic display board, where a new message window has appeared. Inside it is LIGHTSPEED.

BLACKDOVE: Becuz they’re hailun us cap’n!

MAEGLMAOR turns to look in unmasked surprise at his comrade on the screen.

MAEGLAMOR: What the hell is this all about Lightspeed?

LIGHTSPEED: No time Maeglamor – order all your vessels to power up their weapons systems immediately!

MAEGLAMOR: On whose authority?

LIGHTSPEED: Shrike’s – authorization code Alpha Alpha Niner Zero Tango.

MAEGLAMOR pauses, his expression is unintelligible, although it is certainly a derivative of complete shock.

MAEGLAMOR: Very well…

He turns his head to look behind him and barks out his orders.

MAEGLAMOR: Order all fleet vessels to come up to combat power!

He turns a different direction.

MAEGLAMOR: Bring all forward batteries online, and power up engines for maximum strain!

He sits back down in his chair as the bridge comes alive as the crew frantically carries out his orders. LIGHTSPEED and MAEGLMAOR look at each other for a second, and they both nod. LIGHTSPEED’s window disappears, to be replaced with a large table detailing each ship’s status in the fleet. Fade to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED NINETEEN. INT. MACHINA TERRA FORUM – DAY.

STYXX is sitting in his office, his feet propped up on the desk. He holds a small shot glass of a yellowish liquid up to his face, watching as it refracts the light into different colors. His phone rings. He sits up, setting the glass on the table, and picks up the phone.

STYXX: Yes…?

He nods.

STYXX: Excellent…

He nods again.

STYXX: Proceed at your discretion, Mr. Smart…

He puts the phone down, and looks off into the distance for a second. He then looks at it again, picks it up, and presses a button, holding it up to his ear. We cut to:
SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY. INT. NEO TERRA VICTORIOUS FORUMS – DAY.


The situation is now much more under control – troops are lined up behind hastily constructed barricades, fidgeting nervously. SHRIKE and KALFIRETH are behind a mech, trying vainly to fix a broken hydraulics line. SHRIKE is up to his waist inside the back panel, and a loud banging is heard from inside the mech. KALFIRETH is outside, when suddenly, a small ringing is heard. He quickly glances at SHRIKE, then picks a small phone out of his pocket, lifting it up to his ear, huddling away from his friend.

KALFIRETH: Hello…?

STYXX: Eliminate the objective. I will be listening.

KALFIRETH moves the phone to his other hand. He reaches down from his vest and shakily unclips his pistol. He lowers it to his side, and, his voice level, calls SHRIKE out from inside.

KALFIRETH: Shrike…

SHRIKE gets up, and looks at the gun unfazed.

KALFIRETH: I’m sorry.

KALFIRETH raises the gun to SHRIKE’s chest and fires a single shot, point blank. SHRIKE drops to the deck like a sack of bricks, and KALFIRETH lifts the phone up to his ear.

KALFIRETH: Did you hear…?

STYXX: Yes. Good work…

The phone hangs up, and KALFIRETH replaces it into his pocket. He looks down at SHRIKE solemnly for a moment, then nudges him with his boot. SHRIKE rolls over and groans.

SHRIKE: Ow…I thought you said they were rubber…

KALFIRETH: I said I would try to get rubber – but it’s so hard to find the right ammo these days.

SHRIKE looks up at him, surprised, then looks at his chest. A neat hole is burrowed into the front of his vest, and when he rolls over, a squashed metal pellet falls out.

SHRIKE: Oh…
KALFIRETH laughs and extends a hand.

KALFIRETH: Come on, before people start wondering about that shot.

SHRIKE smiles weakly and grabs KALFIRETH’s hand, and his hoisted up to his feet. The two chuckle and KALFIRETH brushes SHRIKE off, when suddenly a loud banging is heard on one of the doors. It subsides, only to be replaced by an even louder banging on all four of the days. The noise grows stronger and stronger, and dents begin to pop out of the doors, in the shape of hands. Then the noise stops. SHRIKE and KALFIRETH run to one of the barricades and huddle down behind it. Soldiers cock and ready their weapons, and mechs spin their engines up.
Silence…
Suddenly, a loud thumping is heard from outside the door they are in front of. The entire assembly turns to watch, the fear is almost tangible. It seems to be growing louder and louder until finally, with a colossal bang, a massive metallic hand rips through the doorway, sending thousands of sharp metal shards skittering across the room. It rotates and another hand slides through the opening, and begin to peel the door apart like an onion. In steps one giant foot, then another. The machine enters, gradually rearing up to it’s towering height, much larger than that of the measly defense’s mechs. We cut to NICO, huddled behind another barricade on the far side of the room.

NICO: My God…it’s…it’s unbalanced!

The mech turns, it’s bright red visor narrowing sharply. It raises it’s right arm, then slams it down, locking it into place. Taking aim at one of the opposite doors, it lets loose a colossal ion beam, lancing forward and blowing the opposite door to pieces. NICO and his squad cower under a shower of debrees, as chunks of the door fly overhead. The gaping maw that was once a door is quiet and dark for a few seconds…and then a loud skittering sound is heard. It grows louder and louder until finally thousands upon thousands of noobs begin clawing over one another, streaming out of the doorway. NICO sits up and sees the sight. Raising his arm over his head, he brings it down forcefully, his hand facing forward.

NICO: Open fire!

Letting loose a fearsome battle cry, his troops raise their weapons and begin to fire blindly into the oncoming horde. Noobs are cut down left and right, bullets piercing their soft flesh and sending them reeling. NICO takes aim with his grenade launcher and fires a single round, sending it sailing through the first noob’s head and detonating it in the second’s. We cut back to SHRIKE and KALFIRETH, who turn to face their own battle. SHRIKE waves his arm towards the mech detachment, and points them towards the colossal noob mech. The lead Hard Light mech nods it’s head and repeats the gesture to his squadmates. SHRIKE and KALFIRETH, meanwhile turn to their own doorway, which is by now swarming with thousands of screeching noobs.

SHRIKE: All squads, open fire!
The cavernous forum comes alive with gunfire from both sides, as the thousands of enemy troops advance on the already miniscule defense. Chairs and couches are ripped up in the crossfire. One of the noobs gets over the wall and rips into an unlucky member, grabbing his head and ripping it from his body. He manages to chuck it at another forum member before TURNSKY dispatches him with a burst of automatic fire to the head. Another noob leaps the barrier and is about to land on TURNSKY before he is cut out of the sky by MONGOOSE. TURNSKY turns and grins at his savior, who gives him a thumbs up sign in return.
Meanwhile, a few steps away, several HL mechs are engaged in a deadly ten on one battle with the overpowered noob dreadnaught. We cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY ONE. INT. REDMENACE’S COCKPIT- DAY.

We are now inside one of the mechs. REDMENACE sits in the cramped nerve center, his face set in grim determination. His mech rocks, and his face lights up as he lets loose with cannon fire. Through his headset we can hear scattered radio messages from his forces.

REDMENACE: Keep it together! HotSnoJ! Get behind it, get behind it!

REDMENACE quickly looks to the left, and his eyes widen.

REDMENACE: Aw ****…

We cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY TWO. INT. NEO TERRA VICTORIOUS FORUMS – DAY.

We cut outside just in time to see a massive left arm come flying out from the enemy dreadnaught, smacking straight into the side of REDMENACE’s mech, sending it reeling into the opposite wall. It slumps to the ground, an enormous indent in the steel plating behind it. The red eye fades, and when it goes completely black, we cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY THREE. INT. GRANDEUR BRIDGE – DAY.

LIGHTSPEED is sitting in his chair impatiently tapping his finger.

LIGHTSPEED: What’s the status on the Atlantis…?

SENSORS OFFICER: They have just arrived sir.

A green blip on LIGHTSPEED’s holographic display confirms the statement. He nods and speaks to himself.

LIGHTSPEED: (Mumbling) Well…we’re here…where are you…?
As if to answer his prayers, his SENSORS OFFICER turns toward him in near-panic.

SENSORS OFFICER: Sir! Incoming jump signatures detected! Hostile configuration!

LIGHTSPEED: Launch all fighters, and inform the fleet to do so as well.

Suddenly, red blips begin appearing all over the screen, followed by several large green ones. LIGHTSPEED nods.

LIGHTSPEED: Inform all Hard Light vessels to change their IFF coding for all new friendly jump signatures to hostile, and do the same for us.

His SENSORS OFFICER nods, and LIGHTSPEED settles back into his seat, thinking out loud once again.

LIGHTSPEED: (Mumbles) Traitors…

Cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY FOUR. EXT. SPACE – DAY.

Masses of vessels are now lined up in a loose quasi-formation, ready to do battle. Hard Light Station hovers in the distance, beckoning to the warriors like an ancient Siren. The massive ships turn towards each other. A single torpedo lances out from one of the smaller vessels in the front. It grows nearer and nearer to the main vessel in the center of the fleet, when suddenly, hundreds of flack bursts explode around it, detonating it in space. As if a flare gun had been shot off, the battle was afoot, the massively outnumbered Hard Light forces engines roaring into life as they rocketed towards the enemy. Torpedoes and flack bursts light up the black sky as the battle begins. We cut to:

SCENE ONE HUNDRED TWENTY FIVE. INT. CORSAIR’s COCKPIT – DAY.

We are greeted by the familiar green glow of the fighter cockpit, except now every system is alert and alive with activity. CORSAIR presses a few buttons and the instruments change slightly. He speaks into his radio.

CORSAIR: Alright everyone…line up, check your targets, and cover each other’s asses, and maybe some of us will get home alive.

CORSAIR flips a switch, and his instruments come alive with new data.

CORSAIR: Alpha One, weapons free and hot. All fighters – weapons are hot.

Suddenly, SINGH lets out a guttural battle cry and blasts forward, his tiny fighter rocketing past CORSAIR. CORSAIR smirks and chuckles, then flips the safety off his throttle lever, slamming it forward and rocketing after his wingman.

CORSAIR: Let’s rock and roll!

Cut to:

 

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Offline Singh

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w000tage! Big battles galore! :D

Excellent work UT!


*w00tage at realizing he's a red shirt too! :D
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Double w00tage at my Rambo-like mad combat skeelz! Turnsky, you owe me one :p

  

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Sweet, I see big explosions comming,and Send the Traitors to Davey Jones Locker.:arr:
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Offline TrashMan

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Brilliant as allways :D
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Offline redsniper

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What? Mech action and I wasn't even mentioned? Maybe I stayed on the Atlantis... whatever, it was a great battle scene. I'm eager to see how this plays out. :D
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Offline Corsair

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UT... you rock :) I love it man.
Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

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Great work!
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hi, wow it's been so long since i've been around i got confused reading that last one... i think it's time i looked at the whole script again, restart the addiction... but yeah it's still good, you still got it UT :)
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Finally decided to read more of this and wow nice work UT..... :yes: