infested larva: pretty good for an impro. i like the shading and the side-of-pencil effects.you might want to think about not over using that- don't overuse any one technique unless taht's the whole point of the pic.
codedog- like the eyes, and the lines of her shoulder and back. good use of line!:)
both of you might want to practice copying stuff, just to get proportions right. real women don't have those sorts of proportions unless they've been surgically... well, anyway.
and i _can_ draw, so don't nobody bag me out bout giving advice i can't support... its one of my (only) talents... go ask setekh...
here, guys, have a cookie. and keep practicing.
