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Offline SypheDMar

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'cause they ain't Terran? But if there were turtle-looking animals and human-looking fish on Vasuda Prime, snake-like creatures don't seem too awkward. If there are problems with the turret because it looks like a snake, though, I suppose it could be textured to vaguely resemble a snake so that in order to see a snake, the person has to try to see it as a snake?

 

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I think the snakes are a weeee bit over the top.

Agreed... those are WAY too snakey.

I do like the missile launchers and I REALLY like the Standard Turrets. For the beams, maybe do something with cobra-like fins, but for goodness sake, make it look less fragile and less obviously snakelike. HighMax's comment on the gargoyle heads is spot on.
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I think his comment was too overexaggerated.
Looking at the Hatshepsut as it is, the beam cannons are disinguished by a retangular column, and that's it.
If the "snake" wasn't shaped as it was on that image but instead like a column, but keeping the fins on the top and the lens where the beam is emitted, I think that would be a good way to use it.

 

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Nice! Maybe remove the last curve of the S-shape (tail) to make them appear less snakey.

  

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« Last Edit: January 04, 2010, 07:47:14 pm by High Max »
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Offline Commander Zane

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This looks no more like a beam turret than the snake does, this, looks like a bleedin' smokestack.

 

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« Last Edit: January 04, 2010, 07:47:31 pm by High Max »
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the beam cannon on the neck-head intersection is just a rectangular box. I thought the tall snake would fit.

 

Offline Commander Zane

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All three BVas cannons are those bent pipes. :P

 
Even more sacrilegious then to keep the design of the turret boxxy as volition "intended" it.
I agree that the snake will have to be redesigned, but i want to keep the snake head if possible.

 

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Looking forward to the results then.
She's begging to kick ass. :nod:

 

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I'm sure anything you come up with will be pure awesome.

 

Offline Aardwolf

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I'm sure anything you come up with will be pure awesome.

Anything except snakes.

 

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While it does look admittedly cool, I think the whole concept of the snake head is rather off.  I mean, taking overall fighter shape inspiration from native Vasudan creatures is one thing, but turning weaponry into nothing short of sculpture seems like the most non-military action in the world to me.  We're talking about a main-line military destroyer here, not a piece of ornamental artwork.

 

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Gotta agree, the snakes are OTT. That third one though looks great.
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« Last Edit: January 04, 2010, 07:47:49 pm by High Max »
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Offline castor

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Maybe it would be nice to keep the turrets looking more like the way Volition intended them to be.
The whole model is more "curvy" than the :v: equivalent to start with, and those turrets are in line with that design choice. Just a little bit overdone, IMO.
I restate: the shapes themselves look nice, the only problem is the immediate association with snakes.
« Last Edit: August 02, 2009, 10:54:46 am by castor »

 
So, I redid the beam cannon.
I could not keep the head in its entirety, but i took the sides from it and reduced their size.
Anyway, here is my beam cannon mk2:

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nice, i like the fact that it looks like it can be folded back when not in use
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I think it's perfect. :yes2: