[Nico]

Originally posted by Maeglamor
[color=66ff00]Watashi wa jouzu-ni ni hongo ga hanase masen.
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her... I just understand "I am"
( I'm trying to learn japanese, but kanas hate me with a passion ).

[Nico]

Tada! "faster than light" Venom presents you page 04 already
hey, Turn', now we're even


next page will be a page to explain some "physics" stuff, the flying islands and that G-stream thing.

[Martinus]

Originally posted by Venom
her... I just understand "I am"

[color=66ff00]Honestly I just have a bunch of phrases that I'm trying to learn. Ironically my reply was 'I don't speak japanese very well'.

Good sense of movement in that new page BTW.
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[Nico]

aaaaaaaaaaah! that should be Nihon go then
now I get why I couldn't translate the sentence

[Martinus]

[color=66ff00]They probably phrased it for ease of pronunciation rather than grammatical correctness.
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[Turnsky]

Originally posted by Venom
hey, Turn', now we're even
 

i

Hate

You

[Anaz]

hmmm...just a note on the diologe flow to take into consideration (yes, I analyze this stuff....don't ask why). When I read page 04, I read the thing that was intended to be read second, so I think it'd look better if you flipped the location of the diologe bubble and the airplane, or moved the bubble to the right, and put the "Wait!..." bubble below that. Note: I am nitpicking here, that is awesome. I wish I could draw like that, but natural forms seem to escape me.

[Stryke 9]

Nah, just moving the word bubble a few points to the left would do it.

[Nico]

Good point, I'll see about fxing it.

[J.F.K.]

Man, that is damn awesome... again! Page 4's first frame is just... wow, I can't believe you drew that Motion lines rock.

[Gortef]

great work Nico

Makes me wanna continue mine badly, but I need to be active in other things right now. It's possible that I might even get a job.

Oh well I'll just see what you two can come up with and enjoy for a while

[Nico]

Originally posted by Gortef
It's possible that I might even get a job.
 

that's the best I could wish for you

edit: on a side note, you've uninstalled ICQ or what?

[Gortef]

thanks

Oh yea haven't noticed anyone of ya yet. I moved from Tornio to Tampere and I still don't have any webconnection of my own (I go visit my aunt time to times in order to read HLP etc., it's nice to have relatives ). That's why I'm offline.

Living without a web makes things a bit harder

[Nico]

oh, I see

[Gortef]

I'm starting to look a place to live today though... so maybe soon I'll have a home of my own

[Nico]

Originally posted by Gortef
I'm starting to look a place to live today though... so maybe soon I'll have a home of my own

cool

anyway:


I expect much more negative comments with that one ( ) but I don't care, sometimes you have to take a break from your current style, and, well, this "info" page will be a good mean to do that ( and I went for a semi SD style as well, to push it even more ).
One thing I love about mangas, it's even the most ridiculous hairstyles will do

[Nico]

w00t! I was inspired today:

Khayron, he talks on page 02.
I could name that pic "For your sake, you better be a friend"
Damn my arm hurts. Graphic tablets are cool, but not exactly confortable...

[Anaz]

that's awesome!

Anyhow, I like the semi-SD, it's a nice break of pace to have something like that with all the seriousness going on

Another comic does something like that, it's drowtales and it does occasional worldsettings. I think those are rather important when using a world rather foreign from our own.

[Zeronet]

Originally posted by Venom


her... I just understand "I am"
( I'm trying to learn japanese, but kanas hate me with a passion ).

Im trying to learn japanese too, as well as kanji.

As for your comics(which are ub3r good),

Masumasu no gohatten o inotte orimasu

[Nico]

Originally posted by Zeronet

Masumasu no gohatten o inotte orimasu

I don't mind people throwing japanese sentences at me ( actually, if that could happen more often that'd be great, that's how you learn ), but I wouldn't mind the translation either

anyway:

Alphonse Langley ( aka "Al" ), the main character. Looks too old there, tho...
It's been a good day, one page and two drawings

mmh, I'm gonna make a drawing like that for all the main characters, I think.