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what do you think?

IT sucks!!
8 (57.1%)
i like it
0 (0%)
It rocks!!
0 (0%)
meh
5 (35.7%)
could do better
1 (7.1%)

Total Members Voted: 14

Voting closed: September 20, 2005, 07:26:09 pm

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hey there folks

i will be starting school soon to study Production
and on the side i will be  learning everything about webdesign and computer networks on the side

anyways, earlier today i came up with two new songs in my  head today while i was at work

they are not totally worked out and complete yet,  so will give  you the  "skinny"...

 but please tell me what you think about it give me any and all of your opinions/ suggestions/comments]

the first one is about this girl who is attracted to this handsome man... and it goes like this....

come in and satisfy my heart.....
(heavyTechno)
i want you to stay with me all night
(heavy techno)
oh ,how you satisfy me with that touch....

you are my flame ,
you are my shinning star in the sky i  i i burning so brightly all night long


[end song]

ok heres the  skinny out of my second song

it is  about a music professional that is late from work and kinds behind shedule

i only got one line on this one done  and i think it is kinda   stupid  but it might work..

hey mr DJ ,

thanks for my song,

but i need you  to call a cab so i can  give you   some  DAP

[end song]

well thats it

what do you guys think?

is this  pure crap
or does it rock  
or does it make you say "meh"  ?

Tell me all  about it

please feel  free to post all of you comments\thoughts\suggestions

 

Offline phreak

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Offline BlackDove

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Something potent by the looks of it.

 

Offline Grey Wolf

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Offline Solatar

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Needs powerchords and screaming.
or double bass.
or a quad-necked guitar.
or Yngwie Malmsteem.

EDIT: Or at least a key and some notes/chord progressions.

 

Offline Deepblue

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C'mon guys, try and be supportive.

 

Offline Grey Wolf

No. I shall not lie. Quite honestly, these lyrics suck.
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Offline Mongoose

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I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...

 

Offline Deepblue

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Well, if you take a look at some of Coldplay's most popular songs the lyrics there suck too. :p

 

Offline Martinus

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Originally posted by Mongoose
I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...

[color=66ff00]This man has seen the light.


These days if it isn't IDM it usually sucks, my mates are jungle fans but it's an aquired taste IMHO.

As for your songs they're not really even frameworks, it's a couple of lines and nothing else. Techno songs aren't famous for their lyrics in any case.
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[q]

come in and satisfy my heart.....
(heavyTechno)
i want you to stay with me all night
(heavy techno)
oh ,how you satisfy me with that touch....

you are my flame ,
you are my shinning star in the sky i i i burning so brightly all night long
[/q]

Hmm.  heavy techno, eh?

Classy

 

Offline aipz

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you should make these lyrics more diverse and post a whole text of the song not just 3/5 lines...
Then we could judge them better...
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Offline Wild Fragaria

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I am sorry but the songs made me laugh :lol:

 
well lol thanks for the input guys i appreciate it
and than you guys for  being honest...
you were a great help

what you witnessed was the byproduct of a combination of very potent Cuban weed (the best stuff) LSD and  some german beer  :eek: :eek:

never mix that  stuff  togther or you will get  pysched out
:thepimp: ;7

 

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Originally posted by Saturn2004
well lol thanks for the input guys i appreciate it
and than you guys for  being honest...
you were a great help

what you witnessed was the byproduct of a combination of very potent Cuban weed (the best stuff) LSD and  some german beer  :eek: :eek:

never mix that  stuff  togther or you will get  pysched out
:thepimp: ;7


:rolleyes: :blah:

 

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Some?!

Techno Techno Techno Techno

 

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I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...



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