I'm loving it Dagger, looking great from a design as well as technical perspective!
However, there's a couple of details that are throwing me off:
- First is the cockpit, in your version it is looking very long, as oposed to the original. The good thing about the original cockpit shape is that it gives the Ptah a sort of agressive "stance", something that IMO gets lost in your interpretation, sadly.
- The gun pods look more triangular in the original (green lines in the attached image). Again, helps with the agressive stance.
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